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Tear

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You let go the trigger of your words,

hitting bulls eye, it shredded my soul.

battered and betrayed

the hurt , buried deep in my heart.

for long, it lay captive in the confines

waging a lonely battle with raging emotions and angst.

rising Β from the depths of anguish

it, finally Β found Β freedom!

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44 comments on “Tear

  1. Mridhula
    June 26, 2016

    loved this!

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  2. radhikasreflection
    June 26, 2016

    Thank you Mridhula 😊

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  3. gururaghavendrasevashrama
    June 26, 2016

    Let not the tear drop fall…..elixir is for angels ….not for all

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  4. shambhavi31
    June 26, 2016

    Yes and when it did, I wiped it with my own hands, only to learn that self love and respect weigh heavier than your lonely words of harshness and betrayal. πŸ™‚
    Beautifully expressed Radhika! ^_^

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  5. Divya Deepak Rao
    June 26, 2016

    Wow! Very nice Radhika!

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  6. Sanjay M Bhaskar
    June 26, 2016

    Very nice… 😊

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  7. Karthik
    June 26, 2016

    A beautiful poem, the art by Aditi, accentuating the depth of the poem….
    However…behold…let the tears roll… for its a cleansing of the soul….
    let joy rock and the tears roll… and fill up the life’s scroll…

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    • radhikasreflection
      June 26, 2016

      Yes, I agree Karthik. Suppression of any emotion leads to more miseries…..always better to let them out. It was actually Aditi’s sketch that inspired me to pen this poem.

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      • pins & ashes
        June 26, 2016

        I was about to ask whether you know aditi personally.. ! would like to see more of her sketches.. πŸ™‚

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  8. pins & ashes
    June 26, 2016

    Beautiful Radhika, you’ve just nailed those moments before the outburst! πŸ™‚

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  9. radhikasreflection
    June 27, 2016

    Aditi is my daughter πŸ™‚

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  10. meetruchisharma
    June 27, 2016

    Beautifully put πŸ™‚

    Liked by 1 person

  11. Snehal
    June 28, 2016

    Well written Atte!!
    And lovely sketch πŸ˜ƒ

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  12. shreyans
    July 1, 2016

    This short piece is incredible..
    Shreyans..

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  13. kiranmag
    July 13, 2016

    Beautiful teamwork of the mother-daughter If the tear comes out from the right eye first it is the tear of happiness & joy.But when it rolls from the left it is tear of pain and sorrow.Trauma is sad.

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  14. Fatma Amin
    July 24, 2016

    Hi. Beautiful post . Quite Heartfelt . For me.. ‘ Feelings are like waves . U cannot stop them from coming but you can decide which ones to surf .. Nice article . Thanks for sharing it!

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  15. myheartbeats4ublog
    July 25, 2016

    nice post…cheers to freedom

    Liked by 1 person

  16. IndiaBlog
    July 26, 2016

    Touched !! Nicely written, Beauty is vivid. Followed your blog. Do check mine, if you wish to read/follow http://wp.me/p77rY5-n

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