You let go the trigger of your words,
hitting bulls eye, it shredded my soul.
battered and betrayed
the hurt , buried deep in my heart.
for long, it lay captive in the confines
waging a lonely battle with raging emotions and angst.
rising from the depths of anguish
it, finally found freedom!
loved this!
LikeLiked by 2 people
Thank you Mridhula 😊
LikeLiked by 1 person
I meant both Radhika….your words and the pic…. powerful with emotions!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks once again Mridhula……means a lot 😃😃
LikeLiked by 1 person
Let not the tear drop fall…..elixir is for angels ….not for all
LikeLiked by 2 people
Yes and when it did, I wiped it with my own hands, only to learn that self love and respect weigh heavier than your lonely words of harshness and betrayal. 🙂
Beautifully expressed Radhika! ^_^
LikeLike
True that Shambhavi. Thanks
LikeLiked by 1 person
You’re welcome! ^_^ I’m happy to have met you here at WP!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Ditto Shambhavi😘
LikeLiked by 1 person
😄😄
LikeLike
Wow! Very nice Radhika!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks Divya 😃
LikeLiked by 1 person
Very nice… 😊
LikeLike
Thanks Sanjay 😃
LikeLiked by 1 person
A beautiful poem, the art by Aditi, accentuating the depth of the poem….
However…behold…let the tears roll… for its a cleansing of the soul….
let joy rock and the tears roll… and fill up the life’s scroll…
LikeLiked by 1 person
Yes, I agree Karthik. Suppression of any emotion leads to more miseries…..always better to let them out. It was actually Aditi’s sketch that inspired me to pen this poem.
LikeLike
I was about to ask whether you know aditi personally.. ! would like to see more of her sketches.. 🙂
LikeLike
Beautiful Radhika, you’ve just nailed those moments before the outburst! 🙂
LikeLike
Thanks dear for the kinds words 😀
LikeLiked by 1 person
Aditi is my daughter 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
Lovely. Very creative daughter you have there.. Please put up note of her sketches.. And give my love to her ..😍
LikeLike
Thanks Ash…..sure I will 😊
LikeLiked by 1 person
Beautifully put 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks Ruchi 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
And completely loved your daughter’s sketch…:)
LikeLike
Thanks again, will convey it to her 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
Well written Atte!!
And lovely sketch 😃
LikeLike
Thanks dear Snehal 😃
LikeLike
This short piece is incredible..
Shreyans..
LikeLike
Thanks a lot Shreyan 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
Beautiful teamwork of the mother-daughter If the tear comes out from the right eye first it is the tear of happiness & joy.But when it rolls from the left it is tear of pain and sorrow.Trauma is sad.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you so much Kiran ☺
LikeLiked by 1 person
Hi. Beautiful post . Quite Heartfelt . For me.. ‘ Feelings are like waves . U cannot stop them from coming but you can decide which ones to surf .. Nice article . Thanks for sharing it!
LikeLiked by 2 people
Thanks a lot Fatma. I am glad you liked it. 😊
LikeLiked by 1 person
nice post…cheers to freedom
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you ……yes freedom is always beautiful 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
true, but on most occasions, freedom is an illusion
LikeLiked by 1 person
Yes at times it is, but I have always associated freedom with something positive.
LikeLiked by 1 person
hmmm…well (almost agree)!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Guess it’s always good to have different perspectives on feelings and experience…..helps us appreciate things better .
LikeLiked by 1 person
yes ma’am…was joking when i said(almost agree). freedom is very much a positive thought..
LikeLiked by 1 person
😊😊
LikeLiked by 1 person
Touched !! Nicely written, Beauty is vivid. Followed your blog. Do check mine, if you wish to read/follow http://wp.me/p77rY5-n
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks Prakash, will definitely check it out. Have a good day ☺
LikeLiked by 1 person