Sidlak #3 – Clouds

O dark clouds!

Blanketing the sky

With a swell of emotions

Rupturing with a mighty deluge

through your grey eyes.

Know Sidlak:

Sidlak poetry (sid/lak) is a structured poetry consisting of 5 lines with 3-5-7-9 syllables AND A COLOR. The last line must be a COLOR that describes the whole poem or the feelings of the writer.

 

47 thoughts on “Sidlak #3 – Clouds”

    1. Sure. Eg. The second line …..blanketing the sky
      Here the word blanketing has 3 syllables……blank, et and ing.
      the is the 4th and sky the 5 th. So totalling 5 syllables. Each sound basically is one syllable.

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