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Haiku – Home & leaves

gi-out-of-body-swap

Time to say adieu

the soul leaves the mortal home

heavens open gate.

 

In response to Ronovan Β writes weekly Haiku challenge #116 : Home & leaves

 

Image courtesy: http://www.healing.about.com

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49 comments on “Haiku – Home & leaves

  1. Sumith Babu
    September 28, 2016

    Hi Radhika your picture talks a lot!! And your words!!

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  2. Sudhir Chauhan
    September 28, 2016

    lovely….

    Liked by 1 person

  3. yagneshthakore
    September 28, 2016

    Simply Marvellous.

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  4. myheartbeats4ublog
    September 28, 2016

    hey radhika..beautiful words(as usual)..and excellent pic

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  5. Cattie's World
    September 28, 2016

    Intriguing Picture. From where did you get such a picture ?
    I wish everyone realises that one day, they have to depart , so if you want Heavens to keep the Doors open for You, You need to do Good Karma.

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    • radhikasreflection
      September 28, 2016

      Absolutely agree with you Cattie. Good karma is our ticket to heaven.
      Thanks to google, you get amazing pictures from the net.
      Thanks for your feedback. Have a good day. 😊😊

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  6. gururaghavendrasevashrama
    September 28, 2016

    can i have it as my epitaph ?

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    • radhikasreflection
      September 28, 2016

      Only when the time is right to say adieu. Till then we keep doing our karma😊

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  7. Akhila
    September 28, 2016

    that’s a stunning image, explaining your post

    Liked by 1 person

  8. scintillatingmemoirs
    September 28, 2016

    This is thought-provoking!
    Great choice in selecting the picture to convey the message

    Liked by 1 person

  9. adsunsri
    September 28, 2016

    Taking a bow at the connect on a marvellous pic..we all are travelling towards our final destination and wish I get sucked liked the girl in the pic…looks easy than travelling with Yama on a buffalo:)

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    • radhikasreflection
      September 28, 2016

      Haha Sunita, your comment got me into peels of laughter. Seriously, this thought never occurred to me. πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜‰

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  10. Divya Deepak Rao
    September 28, 2016

    Radhika very nicely written ! πŸ™‚ And yes Sunita’s comment cracked me up too:-)

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  11. writeshefali
    September 28, 2016

    Stunning image n impactful words πŸ˜ŠπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘ŒπŸΌ

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  12. pranabaxom
    September 29, 2016

    Beautiful take on the prompt Radhika.

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  13. thatmishmash
    September 30, 2016

    Oh this is wonderful πŸ™‚ Loved it Radhika . A wonderful take on the prompt !

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  14. exoticnita54
    September 30, 2016

    Love ❀️ the image you created with that photo

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  15. Maniparna Sengupta Majumder
    October 1, 2016

    That’s an apt picture and death just opens the portal to another world, rightly said… beautiful haiku…

    I wrote a set of haiku poems a year ago on ‘Death and Beyond”. Couldn’t resist myself to share the link with you. πŸ™‚

    https://maniparna.com/2015/07/29/death-and-beyond/

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  16. Mridhula
    October 2, 2016

    in the least words, the last thoughts…. and that’s a perfect pic to go with the message!

    That pic certainly looks comforting and may be a little tempting too…. πŸ˜‰

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    • radhikasreflection
      October 2, 2016

      Yes, Mridhula I agree. I wish when the time comes for us to say adieu, our journey will be as beautiful as in the picture.😊

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  17. saywhatumean2say
    October 4, 2016

    LOVE this poem, I thought of trying that perspective on leaves but could make nothing work and I already had the haiku I used; so because I was late, I just went with it. Yours is lovely and unusual at the same time and the illustration really works. ~~dru~~

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