Tanka Poetry
When the road is tough,
the terrain too uncertain,
you meet a dead end,
don’t be tempted to quit, for
success may just be next door!
Daily Prompt: Tempted
Tanka Poetry
When the road is tough,
the terrain too uncertain,
you meet a dead end,
don’t be tempted to quit, for
success may just be next door!
radhikasreflection 
Amazing one. 😀😀
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Thank you Masoom 🙂
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Welcome Radhika. 😀
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Cool!!
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😇
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Beautiful. By the way, have you read the poetry titled ‘ DONT QUIT”?
It is in a similar vein but quite a bit longer.
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No, haven’t read it. But will definitely look it up. Thank you!!!
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You seem to love experimenting with poetry… Liked this one, and it is through your blog that i learned about Tanaka poetry…
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I am glad that you learnt something new through my blog. Thanks so much 😊
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I love this post
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Thanks Samantha!
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You are welcome
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Beautifully written !!
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Thanks Deepika!
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Brilliant. U have inspired me in just few lines this morning .
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I am humbled. Thanks for positive feedback Supreet! Have a good day!!
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Good day too Radhika. Im amazed by the way u have grown as a writer.. Keep Learning keep achieving
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Thanks a lot for those encouraging words 😇
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Profoundly Simple… Any further observation will not to justice to the depths of this poem….
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Thank you Karthik!
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Well attempted with a nice result…keep it up Radhika Di 😊
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Thanks Kiran!
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If we go down the memory lane, almost all of us, sometime or other in our lives has had the experience reflected in the poem.
To comment on the poem it is “SIMPLY FANTASTIC”.
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Thank you so much 😊
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Another inspiring post, and well written Radhika 🙂
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Thanks dear Divya 😊
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Wise words and perfectly said with a tanka… 🙂
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You are my tanka guru! Thanks!
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Hahaha….:-D
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First I thought is it a situation that ‘tempts’ one to quit? Is ‘tempt’ the right word? On second thoughts I think yes. In tough situations, it is a natural temptation to quit.
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Yes, I feel when situations are challenging, the mind is tempted to give up the effort of trying to emerge out of it.
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That is so motivational Ma’am☺🙌
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Thank you Vivek!
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Absolutely! Such simple words yet those put together carry so much wisdom!
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Thank you Pranitha!!
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Excellent!! 👍
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Thanks Meenakshi!
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Wonderful!
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😇😊
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Beautiful and so very true. We often need to be reminded such things being only human 🙂
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Yes, these gentle reminders help us face the challenge and urge us to carry on without giving up. Thank you so much Belle, for the words of appreciation!
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Reblogged this on Twin Impact and commented:
Just a little while longer and your dream can be your reality. Keeeeeep Diggggingggg
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Thanks a lot for the reblog!
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