Tears flow unabashed,
the harsh trigger of your words,
shreds my soul apart.
In response to Ronovanwrites weekly haiku challenge #133
Haiku – Flow & Tear
Tears flow unabashed,
the harsh trigger of your words,
shreds my soul apart.
In response to Ronovanwrites weekly haiku challenge #133
radhikasreflection 
Words are indeed harsher than anything else. You’ve expressed it well Radhika:)❤
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Yes, and the hurt they cause cannot be undone. Thanks Divya 💙🙂
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So true!!
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Awesome 👏 no words to describe the beauty and a lovely picture too.
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Thanks a lot Kamal 🙂
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The photo and the words speak volumes.
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Thank you Pat!
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Words can cut deeply.
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Yes Jacqueline, they do !!
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Tears are silent language of heart! Beautiful Radhika!
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Yes, they are. Thank you Meenakshi 😊
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Harsh words from your loved one can inflict unbearable pain, you have brought that out very well in so little words, Radhika.
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It can be heartbreaking!
Thanks for your appreciation Pranitha 🙂
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Absolutely! It was my pleasure, Radhika!
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😊💙
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Powerful.Brief but packs a punch.:)
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Thank you Karthik!
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The poor soul….😳
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More hurt and battered…..
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Lovely
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Thanks dear🙂
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Tears are silent yet powerful…
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Yes they are. Thank you Amit!
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Harsh words tear you apart … so true 😊😊
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Yes they do. Thanks so much!
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Happy 2017
Good posts, beautiful blog.
Congratulations.
Welcome to see my creations:
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Thank you 👍
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You’r welcome friend 🍁 🍁
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So beautiful. I discovered a word totally unknown to me, unabashed, an amazing word and so perfect here in your haiku. I feel one should feel free to shed their tears unabashed to heal from those harsh words.
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I am glad you learnt a new word Belle. Shedding those tears freely helps us to purge out all the hurt in us.
Thank you so much dear 😊
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Words can hurt or heal
Depending on the way
They are used
Beautifully written
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Absolutely. That is why we need to choose them wisely. Thanks A.
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Yes.. totally agree with you
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Your beautiful haiku inspired me to compose a haiku reply,
tears not unnoticed
flowing down your silk smooth cheek
unabashed feelings
Take care – Mick
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Absolutely beautiful Mick 😊💙
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Some don’t know the power that words have over us. Words can cause physical, psychological, spiritual and emotional pain. Loved your haiku. Well done.
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Agree with you Vashti. Words can be totally brutal. It’s wise we choose them well. Thanks so much🙂💙
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You’re very welcome.
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Yes words can destroy relationships or heal them. The choice is ours.
Lovely Haiku.
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They are truly very powerful. Thanks Dilip!
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बहुत खूब
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Dhanyawad Sagar!
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Sawgat Hai Radhika ji.
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So much truth and so much raw feeling in so few words. Beautiful.
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Thank you so much Jenny!
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