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Colleen’s Tanka Challenge # 18- Touch & Charm

Feel and reflect on

the flickering thoughts of mind,

ravel its beauty

in a meditative trance,

drifting across the cosmos.


I have used” feel and beauty” for “touch and charm.”

In response to Colleen’s weekly Tanka Poetry # 18 challenge – Charm & Touch

30 comments on “Colleen’s Tanka Challenge # 18- Touch & Charm

  1. yassy
    January 26, 2017

    Evocative and peaceful at the same time.

    Liked by 1 person

  2. Colleen Chesebro
    January 26, 2017

    Welcome! What beautiful words you have shared. I could meditate to them being said over and over. Well done. I loved your Tanka. ❤

    Liked by 1 person

  3. Alok Singhal
    January 27, 2017

    Truly enchanting, thank you ☺

    Liked by 1 person

  4. Divya Deepak Rao
    January 27, 2017

    Beautiful Radhika! Peaceful 😊

    Liked by 1 person

  5. daneelyunus
    January 27, 2017

    very nice

    Liked by 1 person

  6. Belle Pans Maze
    January 27, 2017

    I can almost feel the energy of that meditative trance; so very beautiful ❤

    Liked by 1 person

  7. Meenakshi Sethi
    January 28, 2017

    I bow to your talent Radhika! 💖

    Liked by 1 person

  8. TheresaBarker
    January 29, 2017

    I liked this line especially: “the flickering thoughts of mind” – very visual way to think about mind-thought.!

    Liked by 1 person

  9. thewritewomanblog
    January 30, 2017

    Your words paint a picture of a peaceful and tranquil state of mind, feeling so close to nature and the great scientist above. A feeling of inexplicable bliss. The picture compliments this feeling, Radhika.
    Good morning!

    Liked by 1 person

  10. Marje @ Kyrosmagica
    January 31, 2017

    Very blissful!

    Liked by 1 person

  11. Anthony Angelov
    February 2, 2017

    I love it good job, I have a scientific blog of my own and I just love to read materials just as mine, that’s great work here.


  12. rashishree
    February 19, 2017

    Truly works

    Liked by 1 person

  13. NS
    August 12, 2017

    “Touch and charm ”

    Music to my ears 😄

    Liked by 1 person

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