Feel and reflect on
the flickering thoughts of mind,
ravel its beauty
in a meditative trance,
drifting across the cosmos.
I have used” feel and beauty” for “touch and charm.”
In response to Colleen’s weekly Tanka Poetry # 18 challenge – Charm & Touch
radhikasreflection 
Evocative and peaceful at the same time.
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Thank you Yasmin!
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very nice
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Thanks Rashi!
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Welcome! What beautiful words you have shared. I could meditate to them being said over and over. Well done. I loved your Tanka. ❤
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Thank you so much Colleen 😇❤
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Truly enchanting, thank you ☺
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😇😇
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Beautiful Radhika! Peaceful 😊
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Thanks Divya 🙂
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very nice
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Thank you Daneel!
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welcome Radhika
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I can almost feel the energy of that meditative trance; so very beautiful ❤
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Thanks Belle for your kind words 😊
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I bow to your talent Radhika! 💖
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I am humbled Meenakshi 😇😍😘
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I liked this line especially: “the flickering thoughts of mind” – very visual way to think about mind-thought.!
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Thank you so much Theresa!
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Your words paint a picture of a peaceful and tranquil state of mind, feeling so close to nature and the great scientist above. A feeling of inexplicable bliss. The picture compliments this feeling, Radhika.
Good morning!
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Good morning dear. A great start to the day reading your encouraging feedback. Thanks a ton Pranitha. Have a wonderful week ahead!
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My pleasure, you too Radhika! Good morning!
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Very blissful!
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Thank you Marje!
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I love it good job, I have a scientific blog of my own and I just love to read materials just as mine, that’s great work here.
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Thanks Anthony!
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Truly works
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Thank you Rashi!
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“Touch and charm ”
Music to my ears 😄
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Glad to hear that☺️
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