Today’s task for the challenge is:
You are going to enjoy this. You will pick a nursery rhyme and make a new interpretation of it. You are free to make edits to that rhyme and then give an interpretation. The only ultimate restriction is that there has to be rhyme and a new context to it. Let your imaginations flow.
For more details on the challenge click here.
The original rhyme I chose:
Chubby cheeks, dimple chin
Rosy lips, teeth within
Curly hair, very fair
Eyes so blue, lovely too
Teacher’s pet, is that you?
YES, YES, YES!
My version:
Facebook posts, Whats app messages,
Selfie pouts, tweet within,
Instagram pictures, you-tube videos
Eyes so glued, hands too,
People’s pet, is that you?
YES, YES, YES!
People’s pet, shoulders bent
spondylitis, is that you?
Yes, yes, yes 😀
Loved the part where you say tweet within 😀😀
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Ya, that is bound to happen, with the way we are hooked on to it. Thanks R!
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OMG! UHMAZING!!!
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Thanks Pradita 🙂
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You’re welcome 🙂
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He he.. this is perfect for today’s generation. Great take.. 🙂
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Thank you Prakash 🙂
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Wow. Incredible interpretation. I must say, this was wonderfully thought and done. Radhika. 🤓
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Thanks a lot Asha 😃
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So good.
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Thanks Nidhee!
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Wow!! What a rhyme Radhi. Please get it copyrighted or it might get stolen. 😉😉
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😁😁😁 Thanks a lot dear !!
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Beautiful imagination !!
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Thank you Deepika!
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Hahahaha great 👍 Radhika loved the technology rhyming words. People’s pet is that u, 😉😉😉😉😉😉
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Glad you liked it. Thanks Kamal 🙂🙂
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Yes absolutely Radhika👌👌👌👌
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Smile blissful, seductive face
Lovely hand, alluring shape
Voice gorgeous, very gracious
Soft, soft cheek, inviting a kiss
Youth’s pet, is that you Adonis
Yes, Yes, Yes!
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Beautiful composition Ramesh 👍
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Thank you, Radhika ji.
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Tech Rhymes, Digital poetry, You have started a new trend ….which is waiting to go viral. Great!!!!!
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Haha, thank you so much 😇
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That is an absolutely new take to poems, Radhika! You seemed to have crossed over to a different level altogether. Loved your hilarious version of Chubby Cheeks! Another feather on your cap, my dear poet!
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I am truly overwhelmed by the praises you shower on me dear Pranitha. Feeling elated. Thanks a ton 😇😇❤
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You deserve it my dear!
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😊😘
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Haha…too good Radhika! You get A+ for this 👏👏👏
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Thank you Ma’am 😇
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Brilliant and so relevant!
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Thanks dear🙂
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I happened to read this only now! Loved it. Things of concern, written hilariously. Love the “tweet within” part.
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