Anothers
success or victory
invokes insecurity
negative emotions come to fore
with a tinge of green envy!
Know Sidlak:
Sidlak poetry (sid/lak) is a structured poetry consisting of 5 lines with 3-5-7-9 syllables AND A COLOR. The last line must be a COLOR that describes the whole poem or the feelings of the writer.
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Fantastic job, Radhika. I’d say you filled the sidlak brief exactly!
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Thank you so much Kim! Have a great weekend 🙂
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You too!
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What a picturesque, poetical depiction…….made for each other!!!!! Great.
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Thank you!
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Thanks for sharing about Sidlak! This is new for me. Your lines fit the format perfectly.
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Thank you Shaloo. I was also introduced to sidlak by a fellow blogger. I really enjoy composing it!
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Amazing
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Thank you Rohit!
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Wow never knew this Radhika and u did a great job.
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Many thanks Kamal!!
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Welcome Radhika
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Fantastic, thanks for sharing new concept
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My pleasure Meenakshi 😊
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You’ve done a great job Radhika! I had no idea it involves a colour…fantastic! 🙂
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Thanks a lot Divya!!
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Reblogged this on Vistas and commented:
How true! Thanks for writing such a wonderful sidlak, Rsdhika! 🙂 🌹🌷
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Wow ma’am. 😍👏👏
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Thanks dear🙂
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Reblogged this on Vistas and commented:
How true! Thanks for writing such a wonderful sidlak, Rsdhika! 🙂 🌹🌷
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Thanks a lot for the reblog Smita 😊
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Welcome. 🙂
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Learnt Haiku and Tanka from your space, Radhika! This one is new. The color of envy finishes it off so beautifully! Happy Sunday, Radhika!
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Thanks dear. Enjoy your evening!!
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Go Green, but not with envy 😉
It is a deep composition that you have created, in 5 lines… Amazing to say the least
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Thank you Karthik!!
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Lovely. 😊
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Thank you!!
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You are welcome. 😊
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Great to learn of a new poetry form from you. Will try this out ASAP. Thanks!
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Thanks Reena! I am sure you will enjoy it!
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