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Sidlak # 5 – Envy!

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Anothers

success or victory

invokes insecurity

negative emotions come to fore

with a tinge of green envy!

Know Sidlak:

Sidlak poetry (sid/lak) is a structured poetry consisting of 5 lines with 3-5-7-9 syllables AND A COLOR. The last line must be a COLOR that describes the whole poem or the feelings of the writer.

 

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31 comments on “Sidlak # 5 – Envy!

  1. Kim Richardson
    May 20, 2017

    Fantastic job, Radhika. I’d say you filled the sidlak brief exactly!

    Liked by 3 people

  2. Flashing Thought
    May 20, 2017

    What a picturesque, poetical depiction…….made for each other!!!!! Great.

    Liked by 1 person

  3. swalia
    May 20, 2017

    Thanks for sharing about Sidlak! This is new for me. Your lines fit the format perfectly.

    Liked by 1 person

  4. Rohit Nag
    May 20, 2017

    Amazing

    Liked by 1 person

  5. boundlessblessingsblog
    May 20, 2017

    Wow never knew this Radhika and u did a great job.

    Liked by 1 person

  6. Fantastic, thanks for sharing new concept

    Liked by 1 person

  7. Divya Deepak Rao
    May 21, 2017

    You’ve done a great job Radhika! I had no idea it involves a colour…fantastic! πŸ™‚

    Liked by 2 people

  8. Smita Ray
    May 21, 2017

    Reblogged this on Vistas and commented:
    How true! Thanks for writing such a wonderful sidlak, Rsdhika! πŸ™‚ 🌹🌷

    Liked by 1 person

  9. Veronica Garg
    May 21, 2017

    Wow ma’am. πŸ˜πŸ‘πŸ‘

    Liked by 2 people

  10. Smita Ray
    May 21, 2017

    Reblogged this on Vistas and commented:
    How true! Thanks for writing such a wonderful sidlak, Rsdhika! πŸ™‚ 🌹🌷

    Liked by 1 person

  11. thewritewomanblog
    May 21, 2017

    Learnt Haiku and Tanka from your space, Radhika! This one is new. The color of envy finishes it off so beautifully! Happy Sunday, Radhika!

    Liked by 1 person

  12. Thewellness.blog
    May 22, 2017

    Go Green, but not with envy πŸ˜‰
    It is a deep composition that you have created, in 5 lines… Amazing to say the least

    Liked by 1 person

  13. Sheetal Bhardwaj
    May 22, 2017

    Lovely. 😊

    Liked by 1 person

  14. Reena Saxena
    May 27, 2017

    Great to learn of a new poetry form from you. Will try this out ASAP. Thanks!

    Liked by 1 person

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