Oceanic blue waves
composing fine melody
as it gently ebbs!
In response to TJ’s Household haiku challenge Blue & Melody!
Oceanic blue waves
composing fine melody
as it gently ebbs!
In response to TJ’s Household haiku challenge Blue & Melody!
Excellent work
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Thank you Geraint!!
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Beautiful and so apt with the awesome picture of the wonderful sea
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Thanks for always taking time to read my posts Kamal.😊
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Welcome dear Radhika have a great day
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Good one!
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Thanks Kunal!
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Beautiful!
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Beautiful words like the waves and sea breeze:)
https://vishalbheeroo.wordpress.com/2017/05/19/simply-south-mumbai-an-enthralling-sobo-affair-1/
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Thank you Vishal!
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music of the sea/ocean…always very nice and relaxing.
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Yes it is, ever so soothing!
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Very nice words and scene Radhika
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Thanks Daneel!
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Welcome Radhika
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Very melodious haiku 👌
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Thanks Deepika!!
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Simple and deeply!!!
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Thank you!!
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waves splash thank you
your haiku expressed feeling
for the ebbing tide
oceanic joy
watch little ripples dancing
to its melody
thank you for sharing
and inspiring me to write
haiku my pleasure
Take care, best wishes,
Mick
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That is simply superb Mick👍👏
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Lovely! Such few words and so much meaning!
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Thank you Pranitha 🙂
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Mind blowing
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Thanks!
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Most welcome ☺
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