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Doubt creeps in between,
the air of distrust looms large
lovers drift apart!
In response to TJ’s Haiku Challenge # 5 Drift & Air
Without trust, a relationship can’t survive. Very apt lines.
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Absolutely Shaloo. It is the foundation on which a relationship is built!
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True lines… A perfect read… 🙂
Thank you Ashish !
Hahaha loved the apt picture and so true Radhika, perfect lines of truth.
One of the reasons why relationships fall apart – When doubt creeps in, trust flies out. So true. 🙂
Oh yes Stella. It just erodes a beautiful relationship!
Short lines . bigger truth. The three lines explains the each step in falling apart
Thank you Chris!
It’s sad when this happens. Too many couples my age have been married and then divorce because they forgot t he reasons they married in the first place and started thinking selfishly about themselves rather than their partners
It’s a sad reality many a time!
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Absolute truth right there. Once trust goes, it’s very hard to sustain any kind of relationship.
I have seen a few relationships among friends turn sour because of lack of trust.
Very clever and sadly true. Great haiku!
Thank you TJ!
So true mam 🙂 Amazingly penned 🙂
Thank you Harshit!
You’re welcome 🙂
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Trust and respect are so important in a relationship.
Yes Arlene. They are the pillars on which a relationship stands!
Unfortunately, very true words
True words, Radhika.
Thank you Sudalai 🙂
Nice piece Radhika 👍
Thank you Andrei 🙂
This is so true….wonderful Lines…!!! ❤ 🙂
Thank you Shradha 😊
Very true ..A small misunderstanding can create a wide rift in relationships..
Very well put across.
Perfect haiku radhika
Can make a perfect story for a Bollywood pic!!!!
Haha, thanks! I am sure there have been many movies made with this theme!
Sad truth of relationships! Apt haiku!
Thank you Meenakshi!
One doubt can certainly kill a relationship.
Yes, very much! Thanks Aanchal!
Welcome Mam 🙂
Well said! Trust is key to a happy relationship!
Trust is the base on which every relationship finds its strength and even a crack on that strong, yet fragile base, can cause it all to fall like a stack of cards.
Yes P. Trust is the foundation on which you build your relationship!
Without trust you can’t have unconditional love. I’m so blessed to be at a point in my life where I trust my lover completely.
That’s so wonderful KC. Very few people are so blessed. 💖
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