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Haiku – Drift & Air

angry lovers

Doubt creeps in between,

the air of distrust looms large

lovers drift apart!

In response to TJ’s Haiku Challenge Β # 5 Drift & Air

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55 comments on “Haiku – Drift & Air

  1. swalia
    June 5, 2017

    Without trust, a relationship can’t survive. Very apt lines.

    Liked by 2 people

  2. Ashish kumar
    June 5, 2017

    True lines… A perfect read… πŸ™‚

    Liked by 1 person

  3. boundlessblessingsblog
    June 5, 2017

    Hahaha loved the apt picture and so true Radhika, perfect lines of truth.

    Liked by 1 person

  4. simpledimple
    June 5, 2017

    One of the reasons why relationships fall apart – When doubt creeps in, trust flies out. So true. πŸ™‚

    Liked by 2 people

  5. chrismilano
    June 5, 2017

    Short lines . bigger truth. The three lines explains the each step in falling apart

    Liked by 2 people

  6. KIA
    June 5, 2017

    It’s sad when this happens. Too many couples my age have been married and then divorce because they forgot t he reasons they married in the first place and started thinking selfishly about themselves rather than their partners

    Liked by 2 people

  7. arcane97
    June 5, 2017

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  8. Kim Richardson
    June 5, 2017

    Absolute truth right there. Once trust goes, it’s very hard to sustain any kind of relationship.

    Liked by 2 people

  9. Sadaf Siddiqi
    June 5, 2017

    So true.

    Liked by 1 person

  10. tjparis
    June 5, 2017

    Very clever and sadly true. Great haiku!

    Liked by 2 people

  11. Harshit Dangwal
    June 5, 2017

    So true mam πŸ™‚ Amazingly penned πŸ™‚

    Liked by 2 people

  12. arlene
    June 5, 2017

    Trust and respect are so important in a relationship.

    Liked by 2 people

  13. Geraint Isitt
    June 5, 2017

    Unfortunately, very true words

    Liked by 2 people

  14. Sudalai
    June 5, 2017

    True words, Radhika.

    Liked by 2 people

  15. Andrei
    June 5, 2017

    So true.
    Nice piece Radhika πŸ‘

    Liked by 1 person

  16. SHRADHA099
    June 5, 2017

    This is so true….wonderful Lines…!!! ❀ πŸ™‚

    Liked by 1 person

  17. DeepikasRamblings
    June 6, 2017

    Very true ..A small misunderstanding can create a wide rift in relationships..
    Very well put across.

    Liked by 1 person

  18. Akhila
    June 6, 2017

    Perfect haiku radhika

    Liked by 1 person

  19. Flashing Thought
    June 6, 2017

    Perfect Haiku.
    Can make a perfect story for a Bollywood pic!!!!

    Liked by 1 person

  20. Meenakshi Sethi
    June 6, 2017

    Sad truth of relationships! Apt haiku!

    Liked by 1 person

  21. Aanchal
    June 6, 2017

    One doubt can certainly kill a relationship.
    Great lines.

    Liked by 1 person

  22. kittysverses
    June 9, 2017

    Well said!

    Liked by 1 person

  23. Divya Deepak Rao
    June 9, 2017

    Well said! Trust is key to a happy relationship!

    Liked by 1 person

  24. thewritewomanblog
    June 13, 2017

    Trust is the base on which every relationship finds its strength and even a crack on that strong, yet fragile base, can cause it all to fall like a stack of cards.

    Liked by 1 person

  25. Craftyartistkc
    June 15, 2017

    Without trust you can’t have unconditional love. I’m so blessed to be at a point in my life where I trust my lover completely.

    Liked by 1 person

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