Doubt creeps in between,
the air of distrust looms large
lovers drift apart!
In response to TJ’s Haiku Challenge # 5 Drift & Air
Doubt creeps in between,
the air of distrust looms large
lovers drift apart!
In response to TJ’s Haiku Challenge # 5 Drift & Air
radhikasreflection 
Without trust, a relationship can’t survive. Very apt lines.
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Absolutely Shaloo. It is the foundation on which a relationship is built!
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True lines… A perfect read… 🙂
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Thank you Ashish !
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Hahaha loved the apt picture and so true Radhika, perfect lines of truth.
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Thanks Kamal!
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Welcome Radhika
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One of the reasons why relationships fall apart – When doubt creeps in, trust flies out. So true. 🙂
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Oh yes Stella. It just erodes a beautiful relationship!
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Short lines . bigger truth. The three lines explains the each step in falling apart
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Thank you Chris!
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It’s sad when this happens. Too many couples my age have been married and then divorce because they forgot t he reasons they married in the first place and started thinking selfishly about themselves rather than their partners
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It’s a sad reality many a time!
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Absolute truth right there. Once trust goes, it’s very hard to sustain any kind of relationship.
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I have seen a few relationships among friends turn sour because of lack of trust.
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So true.
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Yes!
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Very clever and sadly true. Great haiku!
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Thank you TJ!
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Most welcome
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So true mam 🙂 Amazingly penned 🙂
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Thank you Harshit!
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You’re welcome 🙂
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Trust and respect are so important in a relationship.
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Yes Arlene. They are the pillars on which a relationship stands!
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Unfortunately, very true words
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Yes🙂
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True words, Radhika.
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Thank you Sudalai 🙂
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So true.
Nice piece Radhika 👍
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Thank you Andrei 🙂
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This is so true….wonderful Lines…!!! ❤ 🙂
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Thank you Shradha 😊
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Very true ..A small misunderstanding can create a wide rift in relationships..
Very well put across.
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Thanks Deepika!
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Perfect haiku radhika
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Thanks Akhila!
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Perfect Haiku.
Can make a perfect story for a Bollywood pic!!!!
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Haha, thanks! I am sure there have been many movies made with this theme!
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Sad truth of relationships! Apt haiku!
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Thank you Meenakshi!
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One doubt can certainly kill a relationship.
Great lines.
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Yes, very much! Thanks Aanchal!
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Well said!
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Thanks Aishwarya!
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Welcome Mam 🙂
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Well said! Trust is key to a happy relationship!
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Absolutely!!
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Trust is the base on which every relationship finds its strength and even a crack on that strong, yet fragile base, can cause it all to fall like a stack of cards.
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Yes P. Trust is the foundation on which you build your relationship!
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Without trust you can’t have unconditional love. I’m so blessed to be at a point in my life where I trust my lover completely.
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That’s so wonderful KC. Very few people are so blessed. 💖
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