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Haiku – Dream & Dance

I have written two haiku’s for the prompt this week. Let me know which one you liked better.

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Spring weaves pure magic

the vibrant blooms dance with joy

dreamy paradise!

***

lone

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Life’s dream in fragments

death plays a mysterious dance

the heartache follows!

 

In response to TJ’s Household Haiku challenge # 15 – Dream & Dance

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43 comments on “Haiku – Dream & Dance

  1. Nisthur Anadi
    July 3, 2017

    Awesome !

    Liked by 1 person

  2. yassy
    July 3, 2017

    Love both.

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  3. sangbad
    July 3, 2017

    I can’t decide…😐

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  4. Both are lovely, can’t decide one. Both says life

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  5. boundlessblessingsblog
    July 3, 2017

    Both are so well and apt with the picture, though I liked the first one, Radhika where there is so much joy in nature and spring in our steps. Great post.

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  6. Divya Deepak Rao
    July 3, 2017

    Hi Radika
    Both are weaved & composed beautifully!I am partial to the first one only because it sings of flowers & spring:)

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  7. Rekha
    July 3, 2017

    Both are lovely, R 😊😊😊

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  8. SarvottamKumar
    July 3, 2017

    Second one is deep👌 loved it.

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  9. Psx :)
    July 3, 2017

    First one caught my mind. Beautiful.

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  10. totallytales
    July 3, 2017

    Both are equally good!!

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  11. Andrei
    July 3, 2017

    I like the second; but I like the first one even better.
    Both were beautifully-written in their own respects. One lively and vibrant, the other melancholic and dark.
    Two thumbs up!

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  12. apassersby
    July 3, 2017

    second one wins here

    Liked by 1 person

  13. DeepikasRamblings
    July 3, 2017

    Both are lovely…One signifying happiness and joy, the other displaying the harsh reality of life.

    Liked by 1 person

  14. Moushmi Radhanpara
    July 3, 2017

    I loved them both, but I guess this one was pure beauty.

    Liked by 1 person

  15. vidur sahdev
    July 4, 2017

    The second one ! ☺️

    Liked by 1 person

  16. Kunal Thakore
    July 4, 2017

    Cant choose, I’ll take either/both (depending on your generosity;))

    Liked by 1 person

  17. Untraveled Routes
    July 4, 2017

    Both of them are so beautifully written!! If I had to go with one I’ll choose the first one ✌️✌️☺️☺️

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  18. Meenakshi Sethi
    July 6, 2017

    First one is all about life and second one is about death, but strangely second one reached deep. Beautiful haikus Radhika. Love your choice of words ❤️

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  20. thewritewomanblog
    July 8, 2017

    As always, a beauty, Radhika!

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