Haiku – Dream & Dance

I have written two haiku’s for the prompt this week. Let me know which one you liked better.


Spring weaves pure magic

the vibrant blooms dance with joy

dreamy paradise!



Life’s dream in fragments

death plays a mysterious dance

the heartache follows!


In response to TJ’s Household Haiku challenge # 15 – Dream & Dance


44 thoughts on “Haiku – Dream & Dance”

  1. I like the second; but I like the first one even better.
    Both were beautifully-written in their own respects. One lively and vibrant, the other melancholic and dark.
    Two thumbs up!

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