I have written two haiku’s for the prompt this week. Let me know which one you liked better.
Spring weaves pure magic
the vibrant blooms dance with joy
dreamy paradise!
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Life’s dream in fragments
death plays a mysterious dance
the heartache follows!
In response to TJ’s Household Haiku challenge # 15 – Dream & Dance
radhikasreflection 
Awesome !
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Thanks Nisthur!
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You are welcome . Radhika .
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Love both.
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Thank you Yasmin 🙂
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Welcome, Radha.
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I can’t decide…😐
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☺️
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Both are lovely, can’t decide one. Both says life
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Thanks dear ☺️
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Both are so well and apt with the picture, though I liked the first one, Radhika where there is so much joy in nature and spring in our steps. Great post.
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Thanks Kamal. True! Nature always spreads so much cheer 😊
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Yes absolutely Radhika and so nice to be one with nature too.
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Hi Radika
Both are weaved & composed beautifully!I am partial to the first one only because it sings of flowers & spring:)
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Thanks Divya. Yes, spring brings in colour and freshness every where! It is musical and magical ☺️
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Both are lovely, R 😊😊😊
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Many thanks dear 😇
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Second one is deep👌 loved it.
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Thanks Sarvottam !!
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First one caught my mind. Beautiful.
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Many thanks Psx ☺️
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Both are equally good!!
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Thank you ☺️
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I like the second; but I like the first one even better.
Both were beautifully-written in their own respects. One lively and vibrant, the other melancholic and dark.
Two thumbs up!
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Yes, tried to pen two different takes on the prompt Andrei. Glad you liked them. Thanks for giving me 👍
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You’re welcome Radhika ☺
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second one wins here
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Thank you 😊
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Both are lovely…One signifying happiness and joy, the other displaying the harsh reality of life.
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Thank you Deepika 🙂
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I loved them both, but I guess this one was pure beauty.
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Thanks Moushmi!
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The second one ! ☺️
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Thanks Vidur!
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Cant choose, I’ll take either/both (depending on your generosity;))
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Hehe. Thanks Kunal. I am a very generous person 😊
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Both of them are so beautifully written!! If I had to go with one I’ll choose the first one ✌️✌️☺️☺️
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Thanks so much! 😊
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First one is all about life and second one is about death, but strangely second one reached deep. Beautiful haikus Radhika. Love your choice of words ❤️
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Thanks a lot Meenakshi 😇
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As always, a beauty, Radhika!
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Thanks P!
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Awesome content…i truely appreciate💕
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