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Sidlak # 6 – Clouds

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Cast a glance

at the mystic sky,

serene clouds meditating

across the expansive horizon

illuminating a pristine white aura!

Know Sidlak:

Sidlak poetry (sid/lak) is a structured poetry consisting of 5 lines with 3-5-7-9 syllables AND A COLOR. The last line must be a COLOR that describes the whole poem or the feelings of the writer.

 

 

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48 comments on “Sidlak # 6 – Clouds

  1. Heart to soul.
    July 12, 2017

    Beautiful! ☺️

    Liked by 1 person

  2. kittysverses
    July 12, 2017

    White encompasses all colours, similarly this poem encompasses the various moods. Beautifully written, Mam. And I’m happy that I learnt a new form of poetry.One doubt, is there any restriction of the syllables in the last line?

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  3. Shiva Malekopmath
    July 12, 2017

    Sidlak Poetry is a new form I have heard.
    I think Radhika it would have been better if you could have given more details about it.
    But you have done justice and have written a beautiful Sidlak. πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘πŸ‘
    Shiva🎢

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    • radhikasreflection
      July 12, 2017

      Let me know if you need some more clarifications Shiva. Will be happy to oblige.

      Liked by 1 person

      • Shiva Malekopmath
        July 12, 2017

        What I mean is, have people been writing such poetry, is there any link to know more about it.

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      • radhikasreflection
        July 12, 2017

        Not many people seem to be aware of it I guess. I too learnt this form only after I started blogging from another co blogger. It is not as popular as haikus and tankas.

        Liked by 1 person

  4. sangbad
    July 12, 2017

    After a time Ma’am…let me share I was thinking to write one or two…

    Liked by 1 person

  5. yassy
    July 12, 2017

    Wow. Thank you for the wonderful verse and thank you for sharing.

    Liked by 1 person

  6. Ratika Bhardwaj
    July 12, 2017

    wonderful ❀

    Liked by 1 person

  7. vidur sahdev
    July 12, 2017

    Well said, Radhika!

    Liked by 1 person

  8. swalia
    July 12, 2017

    Beautiful lines. This is a new form for me. I have never tried my hand at haikus or tankas either. It really needs skill to express yourself in a few lines and with restrictions of syllables.

    Liked by 1 person

  9. daneelyunus
    July 12, 2017

    Nice one Radhika

    Liked by 1 person

  10. Infinite Living
    July 12, 2017

    This is a very new form of poetry to me and you have composed it so well. I enjoyed reading and feeling it.

    Like

  11. Madhusudan
    July 12, 2017

    Nice….you are a great writer….πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘Œ

    Liked by 1 person

  12. Mehul Singla
    July 12, 2017

    That’s beautifulπŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡ I am too trying my hands on poetry.. I even wrote my first one. I’ll be sharing it next week. I hope everyone likes it😊😊

    Liked by 1 person

  13. Infinite Living
    July 13, 2017

    This is a new form of poetry to me and you have done it beautifully!

    Liked by 1 person

  14. Meenakshi Sethi
    July 13, 2017

    This one is The Best Sidlak I ever read! Read it again and again and lost in serenity of your words Radhika!!
    Saving it in my reading file!!

    Liked by 1 person

  15. iampharaohmaktuk
    July 13, 2017

    Beautiful Radhika!

    Liked by 1 person

  16. Sumith
    July 13, 2017

    Beautifully penned. Nice one Radhika.

    Liked by 1 person

  17. thewritewomanblog
    July 18, 2017

    I tried this and was blinded for a few minutes, Radhika πŸ˜‰
    Lucky you, you have wisps of clouds making their way to grow and then burst to shower their blessings on the lush land below.
    A beautiful poem, enjoy!

    Liked by 1 person

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