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Chocolates

 

I unwrap the colourful wrapper

to catch a glimpse of the perfectly shaped

assortment of classic beauties.

The dark ones and the milky deep browns

white silky creme’s Β and bitter sweet ones.

As my eyes admire its smooth texture

I can feel my mouth salivating in anticipation.

Excitedly I dig into a generous bite.

Melting in the mouth

to a tantalizing burst of flavours,

there is a deluge of Β supreme rapture.

The feeling of heavenly lusciousness lingers,

the temptation to indulge in one more

of this sinfully desirous relish is overwhelming

and I meekly submit to it!

 

 

 

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76 comments on “Chocolates

  1. Bhavana
    August 5, 2017

    So tempting way to explain chocolates…felt like I’m eating it now…

    Liked by 1 person

  2. faithfullyyours2017
    August 5, 2017

    wow radhika the chocolates look tempting……n ur description makes my mouth water!

    Liked by 1 person

  3. Akshay kumar
    August 5, 2017

    this is cool, i loved it…

    Like

  4. Andrei
    August 5, 2017

    Temptation *foodified πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†
    Nice one Radhika πŸ‘

    Liked by 1 person

  5. Meet
    August 5, 2017

    Your poem was more relishing than chocolates πŸ™‚ keep up your work

    Liked by 1 person

  6. Miriam Hurdle
    August 5, 2017

    Wow! lovely delicious chocolates. I only eat the 85% cocoa dark chocolate, it has less sugar.

    Liked by 1 person

  7. swalia
    August 5, 2017

    When it comes to chocolates, resistance is futile 😊

    Liked by 1 person

  8. Shweta Suresh
    August 5, 2017

    Ohhh that’s so good. I swear my mouth is salivating. And now I’m hungry for chocolates πŸ˜‚

    Liked by 1 person

  9. Akshay kumar
    August 5, 2017

    this is cool, i loved it..

    Liked by 1 person

  10. Abhay
    August 5, 2017

    Don’t do this when someone is observing a fast, it’s a drag to their resolution 😜

    Liked by 1 person

  11. foreverchocolate
    August 5, 2017

    Yummy, thanks for posting this.

    Liked by 1 person

  12. Nathprasad Dhanawat
    August 5, 2017

    Can I have a Chocolates .. Bcoz I love chocolate 😍😍

    Liked by 1 person

  13. DeepikasRamblings
    August 5, 2017

    Agree to every word πŸ™‚

    Liked by 1 person

  14. Incredible!!

    Liked by 1 person

  15. Moushmi Radhanpara
    August 5, 2017

    Oh, it’s not your fault.
    Your words, the sweet chocolates are so tempting that anyone would just give in, and I’d be the first one to give in, simple surrender πŸ˜€

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  16. Malini
    August 5, 2017

    Aww. I really can’t resist yummy chocolates πŸ™‚

    Liked by 1 person

  17. Megala
    August 5, 2017

    Enjoyed reading your lines! As sweet as chocolate!

    Liked by 1 person

  18. arlene
    August 5, 2017

    Wow, chocolates. I am craving now.

    Liked by 1 person

  19. daneelyunus
    August 5, 2017

    I like choclates

    Liked by 1 person

  20. Flashing Thought
    August 5, 2017

    Yummy, Yummy, yummy…….

    Liked by 1 person

  21. mywords331
    August 5, 2017

    Oh this chocolate love is just mouth watering!

    Liked by 1 person

  22. Nishtha Shukla
    August 6, 2017

    I loved the way u played with wordsπŸ‘

    Liked by 1 person

  23. vidur sahdev
    August 7, 2017

    Yum!!!! πŸ™‚

    Liked by 1 person

  24. Smitha V
    August 7, 2017

    Totally understand the love for chocolates :). You’ve done a great job. Had written a poem on it too. Have provided you the link on the same below. Do check it out when you can.
    https://lifeateacher.wordpress.com/2017/04/27/napowrimo-day-27-for-the-love-of-chocolate/

    Liked by 1 person

  25. dimplescookbook
    August 7, 2017

    Mouthwatering…

    Liked by 1 person

  26. swatiiiiii
    August 7, 2017

    These lines are enough to make a chocolate lover crazyy!!!

    Liked by 1 person

  27. iampharaohmaktuk
    August 8, 2017

    You can never have just one! I grew ravenous while reading this!

    Liked by 1 person

  28. Rupali
    August 8, 2017

    OMG so many chocolates πŸ˜€

    Liked by 1 person

  29. upasna1987
    August 8, 2017

    Chocolate must be proud…he he

    Liked by 1 person

  30. Divya Deepak Rao
    August 8, 2017

    “Submit” is the perfect word when it comes to chocolate! Well-composed Radhika and it was a pleasure to read this. Now I’m craving chocolate!

    Liked by 1 person

  31. jyo
    August 8, 2017

    Very appealing and very tempting postπŸ”

    Liked by 1 person

  32. thewritewomanblog
    August 11, 2017

    Radhika, your words have tempted me enough to rummage around inside the refrigerator and find a chocolate for myself. Your poem had the effect that the ‘Cadbury Silk’ advertisement has on its viewers.

    Liked by 1 person

    • radhikasreflection
      August 11, 2017

      Thrilled to hear that P. What a lovely compliment you have showered on me. Thanks a ton dear πŸ˜„πŸ˜ŠπŸ€—

      Liked by 1 person

      • thewritewomanblog
        August 11, 2017

        Chocolates and that too a poem about it and written by my favorite poet warms my heart…you more than deserve that for that dose of tasty creativity

        Liked by 1 person

      • radhikasreflection
        August 11, 2017

        πŸ˜†πŸ˜‡πŸ™

        Like

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