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Sidlak 8 – Sunset

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Dusk settles,

the marmalade sun

casts a vermilion glaze

colors blend across the twilight sky

painting the horizon to an orange glow!

 

Sidlak poetry (sid/lak) is a structured poetry consisting of 5 lines with 3-5-7-9 syllables AND A COLOR. The last line must be a COLOR that describes the whole poem or the feelings of the writer.

 

 

 

 

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46 comments on “Sidlak 8 – Sunset

  1. Ashish kumar
    December 17, 2017

    The pic is beautiful along with the poetic lines.. 🙂

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  2. Megha's World
    December 17, 2017

    Awesome job Radhika!! Beautifully written I’m yet to learn how to write a poem following the rules of a specific structure. Maybe someday I’ll get there.

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    • radhikasreflection
      December 17, 2017

      Thanks a ton Megha for the appreciation. Do give it a try. It isn’t all that difficult!

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  3. bedtimestories511
    December 17, 2017

    Beautiful…you have painted the picture with your words..

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  4. Nandita
    December 17, 2017

    Very beautiful

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  5. Subbashini Meenakshi Sundaram
    December 17, 2017

    You are an extraordinary writer ma’am,, how you write so beautifully fulfilling the rules .

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  6. balroop2013
    December 18, 2017

    Lovely! The ‘marmalade sun’ brought a smile to my face! Thanks Radhika.

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  7. laneburke
    December 18, 2017

    I read it first without seeing the picture and your words conjured up the most spectacular image in my head. Wonderful.

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  8. Shiva Malekopmath
    December 18, 2017

    Radhika this Sidlak has just come out wonderful
    I am so glad ‘Orange’ is one of my favorite colours and fruits.
    You described it very aptly.
    My Poem is published, please do have a look.
    Thanks
    Shiva

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    • radhikasreflection
      December 18, 2017

      Many thanks Shiva. It truly is a bright and vibrant color. Will check out your poem shortly 👍

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  9. Parth Agarwal
    December 18, 2017

    Heyyyy woww!!! The picture complements the sidlak amazingly.. awesome work!!😍😍
    I am new here and have written a few poems. Please do give them a read and share you valued feedback. I hope you will like them. 😋
    https://theunspokeninus.wordpress.com/2017/11/29/the-hollow/
    Keep up your amazing work!!!!😀😀

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  10. Madhusudan
    December 18, 2017

    bahut sundar photograph manlubhawan aur sundar lekhan.

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  11. Megala
    December 18, 2017

    Beautiful photo ! Beautiful comparisons !!

    Liked by 1 person

  12. Moushmi Radhanpara
    December 18, 2017

    Absolutely beautiful 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

  13. boundlessblessingsblog
    December 18, 2017

    Beautiful words and see how the marmalade glow is cutting the sun too, Radhika. Awesome picture so quiet and serene. Great post.

    Liked by 1 person

  14. mukhamani
    December 18, 2017

    This is wonderful 😊 I did not know about it, must try. Thanks.

    Liked by 1 person

  15. foxxyt
    December 18, 2017

    Very nice ✔️

    Liked by 1 person

  16. Aman Thakur
    December 20, 2017

    nice…

    Liked by 1 person

  17. Bhavana
    December 20, 2017

    Your words are as beautiful as that pic. Nicely structured!

    Liked by 1 person

  18. blessmyf🍎🍏dbypayal
    December 28, 2017

    That’s simply beautiful …..

    Liked by 1 person

  19. thewritewomanblog
    December 30, 2017

    Tomorrow, I hope to witness the last sunset of 2017 by the beach and these are the words that will be ringing in my mind then, Radhika. 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

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