Dusk settles,
the marmalade sun
casts a vermilion glaze
colors blend across the twilight sky
painting the horizon to an orange glow!
Sidlak poetry (sid/lak) is a structured poetry consisting of 5 lines with 3-5-7-9 syllables AND A COLOR. The last line must be a COLOR that describes the whole poem or the feelings of the writer.
radhikasreflection 
The pic is beautiful along with the poetic lines.. 🙂
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Thanks a lot Ashish 🙂
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Awesome job Radhika!! Beautifully written I’m yet to learn how to write a poem following the rules of a specific structure. Maybe someday I’ll get there.
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Thanks a ton Megha for the appreciation. Do give it a try. It isn’t all that difficult!
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Thanks for the motivation but with the ease you write it is commendable.
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The feeling is mutual Megha when I read your beautiful poems. Thanks again dear 🙂
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Beautiful…you have painted the picture with your words..
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Gratitude!
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Very beautiful
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Thank you Nandita!
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You are an extraordinary writer ma’am,, how you write so beautifully fulfilling the rules .
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Many many thanks Meenakshi for all the encouragement you shower on me ❤️
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Lovely! The ‘marmalade sun’ brought a smile to my face! Thanks Radhika.
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So glad to hear that. Thanks Balroop 🙂
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I read it first without seeing the picture and your words conjured up the most spectacular image in my head. Wonderful.
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Thank you so much for the lovely comment!
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Radhika this Sidlak has just come out wonderful
I am so glad ‘Orange’ is one of my favorite colours and fruits.
You described it very aptly.
My Poem is published, please do have a look.
Thanks
Shiva
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Many thanks Shiva. It truly is a bright and vibrant color. Will check out your poem shortly 👍
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Heyyyy woww!!! The picture complements the sidlak amazingly.. awesome work!!😍😍
I am new here and have written a few poems. Please do give them a read and share you valued feedback. I hope you will like them. 😋
https://theunspokeninus.wordpress.com/2017/11/29/the-hollow/
Keep up your amazing work!!!!😀😀
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Thank you so much Parth! Will surely check out your poems!
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Your welcome😊 hope you will like them 🤞😋
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bahut sundar photograph manlubhawan aur sundar lekhan.
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Aapka bahut shukriya Madhusudan!
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Beautiful photo ! Beautiful comparisons !!
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Thank you Megala!
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Absolutely beautiful 🙂
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Thank you Moushmi 🙂
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Beautiful words and see how the marmalade glow is cutting the sun too, Radhika. Awesome picture so quiet and serene. Great post.
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Thank you Kamal. This was taken from my balcony 🙂
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Awesome picture Radhika
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This is wonderful 😊 I did not know about it, must try. Thanks.
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Do try it Lakshmi. I am sure you will enjoy it 🙂
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Very nice ✔️
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Thank you!!
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nice…
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Thanks Aman!
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You are welcome…:-)
and you can visit my blog too…;-),
inspiringdude.wordpress.com if you find something intrusting then Don’t Forget to follow my Blog…:-)
Keep in touch…:-)
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Sure , will check it out Aman!
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Thank you…:-)
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Your words are as beautiful as that pic. Nicely structured!
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Thanks a lot dear🙂
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That’s simply beautiful …..
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Thank you!!
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Tomorrow, I hope to witness the last sunset of 2017 by the beach and these are the words that will be ringing in my mind then, Radhika. 🙂
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So glad to hear that P. Wishes for a glorious 2018 💖
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You too, my dear!
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