This time I am attempting a twin Sidlak, bringing out the opposites faces of the sea. Looking forward to your feedback.
echoes idling waves
ebbing gently on the shore
muted tides entrance the dreamy eyes
reflecting the blue expanse in a gentle harmony!
swollen with ire
thunderous rumbles lash out
monstrous waves building a crescendo
the grey sea sings a tempestuous opera !
Sidlak poetry (sid/lak) is a structured poetry consisting of 5 lines with 3-5-7-9 syllables AND A COLOR. The last line must be a COLOR that describes the whole poem or the feelings of the writer.