
Material wealth defines success
lack of it brands you a failure.
Nature gifts us with bounties
we cruelly plunder her bare.
People cling to us when the going is good
but abandon us in our bad times.
We love holding on to the past
and worry about our future.
Passing on the blame is easy
failing to take up the responsibility, is a challenge.
Education gives us knowledge
but ignorance of values still remains.
We get so busy trying to copy our idol
that we forget to be an original.
Gadgets virtually connect us across the globe,
yet there is total disconnect in person.
Enamored by the fake facade people put on,
we fail to recognize the real inner beauty.
Chasing shallow illusionary goals
the deep meaning of life eludes us.
Best of both world or not…depends on how we readers are looking or reading it. Nice one !
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It is up to us to take what suits us the best. Thanks Sunil!
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Radhika, this is such a beautiful coincidence I just finished a poem based on contrasts and contradictions.
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Oh, truly a coincidence. Will check it out shortly Megha. Thanks!
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Haven’t published yet Radhika.
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Oh ok. When you publish it then 🙂
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Thanks Radhika
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Beautiful composition Radhika !! Loved it 🙂
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Happy to hear that 😇. Thanks
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Beautiful 🌹
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Thank you Jayshree!
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Radhika, you have with strong and sure hand highlighted the many false values
that rule a big part of the world. Thankfully not all.
Every line carries truth but I pray it is not the whole truth as we are – I believe – many people out there that seek the true values both within ourselves and others.
That form a basis for growth of the good and nourishing.
🌹 miriam
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Well yes Miriam. I have only tried to bring out the eroding values in people with the progression of time. Today we do have very many people who restore our faith in the good with their selfless and sincere deeds. It’s only because of such wonderful people that the world balances itself despite diluted principles of people at large. Happy that you shared your thought 💖
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Beautiful!
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Many thanks Arlene!
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Reality in each line, Good one Radhika Ji!
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Many thanks Abhay 🙂
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Welcome!
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Wow! Its lovely.😊
What an irony indeed! We do live in world of opposites even though we try hard to find the similarities the contrast refuses to hide. 🙂
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Yes. It’s such an irony, isn’t it? Thanks for stopping by. Much appreciated!
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Yes indeed. I’m glad I did. ^_^
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Absolutely agree totally with this wonderful poem, Radhika and the last two lines ‘Chasing shallow illusionary goals, the deep meaning of life eludes us’ sums up the illusionary world that we are living it.
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Glad you liked it Kamal. Thank you!
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Welcome Radhika.
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Beautifully arranged opposite words with a deep meaning …good morning Radhika didi
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Thanks Kiran. So good to see you here after ages. How have you been?
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True words, well-written 🙂
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Thanks dear!
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Beautiful piece of write up. You never fail to impress these readers
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Thank you Tanvir for the lovely comment 🤗
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Beautiful
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Wonderful piece.
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Thank you Rupali!
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This poem expresses so much about gratitude, fake life or gadget, emotional connect with souls. It’s beautiful, deep, intense and honest at the same time.
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Thanks Vishal. Its sad today we are surrounded by such people and believe the fake mask they put on to be true.
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Nice one Radhika
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Thanks Daneel!
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Welcome Radhika
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Beautifully woven words of opposites !
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Thank you Megala 🙂
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Lately I have been thinking about it a lot; the mere meaninglessness and shallowness of life.
You composed the thoughts really well. The irony sticks with me!!
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Thanks Moushmi. Yes the irony makes us contemplate on the direction of false belief, in which we are heading!
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You have done this so well and beautifully. I find absolute truth in your composition!
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Thank you Pragalbha.
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You are very welcome Radhika
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Speechless ma’am. You always teach reality so beautifully.
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And you never fail to compliment my work. Thanks a ton dear 💝
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Life is indeed a combination of contradictions…where there is love, there is indifference, pain, abandonment. Light and darkness lose their significance without each other and relationships seem hollow without efforts to make them lovable. Real meaning of success unfolds itself only after we face failures. 🙂
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Well said Balroop. Life is woven over a carpet of contradictions which is quite ironical at times. We need to learn and grow!
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Wonderful 🙂 So true
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Thank you Lakshmi!
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There should be opposites, we cannot say there can be.
You have used the should be in its proper sense.
Thumbs Up! Radhika!!
Shiva
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At first I thought that they were many prompts made into a poem and a re-read made me realize that you have given meaning and life to antonyms with your beautiful poem, Radhika.
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Thank you Pranitha!
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Radhika every line of your poem was worth reading. Especially “we get so busy to copy our idol that we forget to be original.” Keep it up!!
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Thanks so much for liking my poem Ridhima 😊
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My pleasure☺
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You are right… Material world have dualism. The duality of positive-negative, good-bad, happy-sad and so on always exists… but life is blissful when a person creates bridge between two extreme polarities… Duality have no opposites.. it have just two polarities.. The duality is thesis and antithesis… just take LOVE & HATE.. you have love and hate. Love is the thesis, hate is the antithesis; and most people die caught in the struggle, conflict, between the two. They are never able to see that there is a subtle connection between love and hate; that they are not two energies but one energy having two polarities. They are just like the negative and positive in electricity -but it is electricity all the same… Life is complete in its wholeness… 🙂
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