A haiku and Tanka for Colleeen’s weekly poetry challenge #72. Prompt words Breakthrough & Movement, but to use synonyms only!
Haiku
Boosting the morale
positive reinforcements
a paradigm shift!
Tanka
Ink illuminates
thoughts so crude and raw
finding the right words
an artistic connoisseur
poetic evolution!
Beautiful !!
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Thanks Deepika!
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well done, like them both Radhika!
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Thanks Kate!
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pleasure!
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Good use of the words 🙂
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Thank you Lakshmi 🙂
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Awesome words of Haiku and Tanka, Radhika and for sure a poetic evolution with the pen. Great post.
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Thank you Kamal 🙂
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Welcome Radhika.
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Ah, “finding the right words”, the true pursuit of all us poets, and in the haiku, “paradigm shift”, two words only but signifying worlds of difference from some positive strokes.
I encourage my person to use positive reinforcement as method of choice for my training – all those treats, it works every time 🙂
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Glad that you are a follower of positive reinforcement and reaping its benefits. Thanks so much for your presence here Ben!
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You are nominated for liebster an award…Congrats❤❤
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I don’t do awards anymore Rida. But thanks all the same for the nomination 🙂
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Loved it Radhika 🙂
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Thanks Moushmi 🙂
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Beautiful Radhika.
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Thanks Sumith!
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Beautiful ma’am
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Thanks Meenakshi 🙂
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Beautiful 👍👍
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Thank you Gourav!
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Well done, Radhika. I LOVE both of your poems. Great message. ❤
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Many thanks Colleen 🙂
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Excellent
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Thanks 🙂
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Both of them are lovely in their own right!
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Thanks Alok!
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I admire your ability to use these forms so well!
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Heartfelt thanks Pragalbha 🙂
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You are very welcome!
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They are both wonderful Radhika! So true…Positive appreciation can create wonders!
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Many thanks Divya. Truly , positive and genuine appreciation works wonders!
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Beautiful – even the font fits the words 🙂
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Thanks Scott!
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Both beautiful pieces, Radhika.
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Thanks Pranitha!
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Very nice!!!
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Thanks Smitha!!
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Nice. I really like the ending.
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Thank you so much 😊
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