In reponse to Kat’s twittering tale #72, to write a tale within 280 letters on the given picture prompt.
Photo prompt by Leigh Heasley at Pexels.com
Uma slammed on the brakes, bringing the car to a screeching halt. The place looked very familiar. Recollection came in a flash. Her husband, in her previous birth, had brutally murdered her a few months after the wedding. She recognized the old man walking out. She knew what to do…
Letter count 280
What a fabulous tale Radhika! Well done!!! π
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Thank you Kat π
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My pleasure! Great story! ππ»
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oohh..that was really eerie..but so well conceptualized.
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Thanks so much Megha π
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Lovely story !! Left me speechless
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Thank you Tanvir βΊοΈ
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So short but so beautiful.
With a question mark in the end.
Is she going to avenge her death!!
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Thanks Vikram. I like leaving it to the reader’s interpretation π
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well written, can feel the suspense and guess whatβs coming next!
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Thanks Kate. How do you want it to take it forward?
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she confronts him with a smile and slowly recognition and fear dawn on his face!
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Lovely π
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I got goosebumps Radhika!
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ππ thanks Malini
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Very nice written Radhika
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Thanks Daneel!
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Welcome Radhika
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Wow Radhika such a beautiful story you made from the picture. Suspense and chills in your story. Great post.
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Glad you liked it Kamal. Thank you so much!
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Welcome Radhika
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Ah..the suspense is killing.. continue with the story and you can bring out a nice novel π
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Thanks Deepika. How would you have ended it?
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It is really amazing to create a suspense within 280 words ! Kudos !!
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Thanks a lot Megala π
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Hats offπππ
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Thanks Abhishek π
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Chilling!!!
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U r too good!
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Thanks so much Manasa π
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Brilliant interpretation and the contrast of two lives belong to the done era. A powerful stroke, Radhika.
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Thank you so much Vishal!
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Always delighted to read your thrilling stories.
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Thanks Meenakshi!
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Welcome maβam. Keep on writing, pleasure reading it.
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Short and spot on,
Loved it Radhika..
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Many thanks Moushmi!
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Kya baat hπ
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That gave me the shivers which means that your way with words is something laudable Radhika! Amazing π
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Grateful for your constant support Divya π
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Run him down π good. Post!
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Thanks! Is that how you would want it to end?
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Well that or she could become his housekeeper ππ
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And then plan her revenge…..
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Indeed ππ
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Oh! Spill-chilling thoughts. Of course she knew.
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Thanks π
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Wowβ¦and it reminded me of Karz!!
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Now that you mention, yes the biggest hit then, which was based on reincarnation π
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Yeah! And the amazing songs with lovely tunes!!! π
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