
Beneath the fabric of love
dreams of passion weave
intricate designs of rhapsodic rhythm,
threads seam in total surrender
to paint bold strokes of red
fervent kisses sew a sensuous hem
motifs of tender caress lace it
sealing it with an intimate fusion
Oh! the romantic soul is draped
with an amorous blanket!
Very lucid….i loved the flow
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Thank you Piyali 🙂
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How do you write so beautifully?
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Thanks a million dear. You’ve made by day with the beautiful comment 🙂
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I loved the fabric woven by you in the post 👌
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Many thanks Deepika!
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Nice!
threads seam in total surrender
This line stood out for me!
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Glad to hear that Rishhu. Thanks!
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Welcome!
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Beautifully threaded the feelings in different fabric
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Thank you Tanvir!
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Wow. An aesthetic sensuous verse. Beautiful , I am wowed.
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Thanks Yasmin. Means a lot coming from you my dear poetess 💝
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You are a shining star with so much potential. This will be a favourite of mine, Radha. You are a poetess par excellence.
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I am truly humbled Yasmin 🙏
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Write some more , dear girl. 😊🤗
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With friends like you who constantly encourage, yes will definitely keep the words flowing. Thanks again 😊💙
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Very beautiful, Radhika. ☺
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Thanks Sumit!
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Beautifully peened and so sensuous.Loved it Radhika.
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Thanks a lot Megha 🙂
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Beautifully written
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Thanks Andrew!
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woven with love 🙂
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👍🙂
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es kavita ko behtarin kahne men atisayokti nahi hogi…….lajwaab tarike se likha hai apne….bahut khub.
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Khushi hui, aapko pasand aaya. Dhanyawad Madhusudan!
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aapne bahut achcha likha sadaiv ki tarah………..swagat apka……
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🙏🙏
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Koyee to umra me hamse bada ho…..Ye mera haq hai😀🙏🙏🙏
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😁😀
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Indeed a very wonderful fabric woven 🙂
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Thanks Moushmi 🙂
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Welcome 🙂
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Wow so so beautiful, from where you are getting this beautiful words ma’am. You are an amazing poetess.
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I am overwhelmed dear Meenakshi. Appreciate your constant encouragement. Thanks a ton dear 😇🤗💝
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Welcome ma’am. Love reading your posts
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And I love the profound life lessons you share in such few words 👏
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🙏💗
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You have woven such beautiful lines!
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Thank you Pragalbha!
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You are very welcome 🙂
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Lovely words.
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Thanks Cornelia!
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That would be wonderful way to design a fabric.
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Thanks Vikram!
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This is so beautiful Radhika! You’ve woven the string of w
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of words in such an enticing way:)
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Thanks a lot Divya 😊
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That is a very lovely fabric, woven so beautifully together, Radhika 🙂
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Thanks a lot Pranitha 😊
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Wow! Beautiful nd sensual 👌
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Thank you Shayra 🙂
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Welcome mam 😊
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