In response to secretkeeper’s weekly writing prompt #133, to use the following five words or their synonyms in a poem/fiction.
Road|Sign|Shift|Clue|Captive

Lost in the wilderness
with no clue ,where to head
tar grey clouds brood over
damp forest floor, exudes an acrid stench
branches draw monstrous silhouettes
menacing winds croon a forbidding song
ravenous howls grow louder
a sign of looming danger
eyes move furtively in the dark
failing to find a road to escape
the probing hand feels a slimy creature
sending shivers down the spine
the screams for help, echo back
the soul held captive by fear
drenched in sweat, completely paralyzed.
“Cut”! comes in the directors call,
Smiling, with a thumbs up,
A great shot, in one take!
Pack up! He shouts!!
Oh wow! How clever, the twist in the end! Radhika, your deft pen has pleased both your horror loving readers and the horror intolerant ones 😂 What a masterful write up! Cheers 😊💜
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Particularly liked this line – ‘the soul held captive by fear’
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Thank you dear 😇
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Much appreciate your feedback Isha. Glad you liked it. Thanks a ton ❤️
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💟💟
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bahut hi khubsurat vicharon ko panktibaddh kiya hai…..khubsurat.
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Dhanyawad aapka Madhusudan!
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Well done! Very eerie indeed
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Thank you 🙂
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Such a cool idea and a creative use of the words. Will be great to see how you tackle more in the future 🙂
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Thank you. I enjoy doing such challenges. Hopefully will be able to do a decent job 🙂
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Hushhhh! you saved me 🙂
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😀😀
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Wow! What a twist in the end…the way it was proceeding, I had expected a scare! 🙂
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Many thanks Balroop. Just wanted to give it a different ending 🙂
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Didn’t see that coming! Well done!
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Thank you Kunal!
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Hahaha nice and loved the ending, Radhika though you made the poem too deep and scary. Beautiful poetic words, and such an apt picture too.
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Thank you Kamal for the lovely comment. Glad you liked it 🙂
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Welcome dear Radhika.
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lol had me sucked in, great writing and appreciate the twist at the end!
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Thanks dear Kate 😀
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glad to read 🙂
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What an amazing poem..and the twist in the end deserves a loud applaud
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Thank you so much Balaka 😇
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Hello Radhika,
you have a great gift, that is gift for poems.Wonderful poem.
Keep writing and thank you
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Many thanks Ben for the appreciation and encouragement. 😇
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Nice post! really enjoyed while reading it!
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Thank you Siddharth!
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My pleasure!
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Phew… I was wondering what next, what next ? The director had an awesome shot and so did you 🙂 well done 🙂
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Haha! Thanks Deepika 🙂
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Marvelous poem, you are always wonderful ma’am. Your words proves you should go places. Did you tried to publish your works as book. I feel you can.
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You are such a kind soul Meenakshi, always so appreciative of my work. I have still not thought about publishing a book. God willing sometime down the line. Thanks a ton for your constant encouragement. Lots of love❤️
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💗👍
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This was so well done! You have outdone yourself here, I feel! Wow!
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Thanks Rishhu for that one. 😇
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Welcome! 😊
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Whew! What an atmosphere 😀
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Thanks Dahlia ☺️
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Haha…the last few lines… great twist 😀 The description of a menacing forest, the ambience perfectly created for a horror film!
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Thank you Mani 🙂
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Hah!! I loved the twist in the end 🙂
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Thank you Moushmi!
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brilliant, Radhika … love the twist. Peace ✌
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Many thanks Afzal 🙂
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a pleasure. peace ✌
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