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Tanka – Charm & Time

In response to Colleen’s weekly poetry challenge #77,  Charm and Time with the condition only to use their synonyms!

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Futile to resist

 spell of  magnetic allure

the hours transpire

bewitching gaze consumes me

burning in intense desire!

 

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33 comments on “Tanka – Charm & Time

  1. jottingink
    March 28, 2018

    Aha! those mesmerising Aishwarya eyes and your beautiful lines

    Like

  2. jottingink
    March 28, 2018

    Wow ! Those mesmerizing Aishwarya eyes and your beautiful lines 😇

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  3. Megala
    March 28, 2018

    Lovely !

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  4. vikramhereblog
    March 28, 2018

    Oo.
    Wonderful.

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  5. Charming post

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  6. Akhila
    March 28, 2018

    Truly charming

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  7. Miriam Hurdle
    March 29, 2018

    Beautiful and full of energy! ❤

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  8. Infinite Living
    March 29, 2018

    Beautiful!!

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  9. Dahlia
    March 29, 2018

    Bewitching indeed!

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  10. rashishree
    March 29, 2018

    Excellent

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  11. Ruchisvegkitchen
    March 29, 2018

    Wow fantastic post.. wonderful

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  12. So wonderful

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  13. mywords331
    March 30, 2018

    Tanka is something new for me.
    Thanks di for introducing me with this form of poetry. The lines are indeed magical.

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  14. thewritewomanblog
    April 2, 2018

    Bewitching eyes indeed! The beholder will be held captive under that powerful gaze and nothing less than desire can be a result of it.

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  15. Pingback: #Tanka Tuesday Poetry Challenge No. 77 RECAP, “Charm & Time,” #SynonymsOnly – colleenchesebro.com

  16. Raspberry Ketones
    December 20, 2018

    Good writing. Cheers

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