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Haibun – The Autumn Dance!

In response to Colleen’s weekly tanka challenge # 80, to use the synonyms only of the prompt words Soft & Gather.

leaves

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I step out to witness a picturesque seasonal transition, one autumn morning. The porch is enveloped in a vibrant carpet of yellow and crimson leaves . The cool breeze caresses and whispers to them, sweet nothings. Coyly smiling, they sway under the cloudy sky, whispering secret messages, finally cascading to create a rustling harmony.

The mild autumn breeze

wafting warm cinnamon blends

celestial rhythms

the scarlet leaves congregate

choreograph balletic moves!

38 comments on “Haibun – The Autumn Dance!

  1. The Type-writer
    April 18, 2018

    Beautifully penned.. painted.. or choreographed.. ?? All in one.. well done dear.. ๐Ÿ˜‡๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ’ž

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  2. Ben Aqiba
    April 18, 2018

    I like your article Radhika,
    “Autumn is a second spring when every leaf is a flower.” Albert Camus

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  3. Megha's World
    April 18, 2018

    Aha..this spun me a delight of aroma and beauty in nature.Well done,Radhika.

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  4. Megala
    April 18, 2018

    Enjoyed watching a well-choreographed dance ! ๐Ÿ™‚ Thanks a lot !!

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  5. boundlessblessingsblog
    April 18, 2018

    Awesome words so well picked up on these two synonyms, Radhika. Subtle and simply marvelous way of penning these words. Loved the picture too.

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  6. soiba
    April 18, 2018

    Beautiful dance ๐Ÿ™‚

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  7. DeepikasRamblings
    April 18, 2018

    Beautiful composition and choreography, Radhika ๐Ÿ‘Œ

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  8. Sameera
    April 18, 2018

    Words danced beautifullyโค๏ธ

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  9. rishhuu
    April 18, 2018

    This was so eloquently done! Freaking awesome! Beautiful.

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  10. Megha's World
    April 18, 2018

    Yes it did with its cinnamon whiff.

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  11. vishalbheeroo
    April 19, 2018

    The rhythm of words captures the mind and how!

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  12. Moushmi Radhanpara
    April 19, 2018

    Beautifully written ..

    Liked by 1 person

  13. Colleen Chesebro
    April 20, 2018

    How beautiful your imagery is. Well done! โค

    Liked by 1 person

  14. Miriam Hurdle
    April 23, 2018

    It sounds like music, Radhika! Beautiful!

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  15. you are something different ๐Ÿ‘Œ

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