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Heart Broken!

In response to secretkeeper’s weekly writing prompt #139, to use the following five words or their synonyms in a poem/fiction.

Write|Never|Place|Mark|Place

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She writes her memoirs

with the ink of her tears

that pour out odious feelings

on an emotionally tainted paper.

 

The dark side of his personality

adorns a nefarious cloak

his wounds  scar her soul

leaving her heart broken.

 

Reeling under the shock of his callous behavior

the place holds painful memories

she makes a promise to her resilient spirit

to walk out, never to return.

 

52 comments on “Heart Broken!

  1. Beautiful emotions depicted

    Liked by 1 person

  2. Myrtle
    May 2, 2018

    Beautiful

    Liked by 2 people

  3. Annika Perry
    May 2, 2018

    Radhika, the quotes are seamlessly incoporated in your moving and powerful poem! Yeah…I’m glad she walked out, never to return!

    Liked by 2 people

  4. Madhusudan
    May 2, 2018

    Emotions se bharpur …
    .behtarin kavita.👌👌

    Liked by 1 person

  5. Megala
    May 2, 2018

    She is so smart that she decided to walk out !

    Liked by 2 people

  6. Megha's World
    May 2, 2018

    Such a poignant poem and an excellent attempt to include all the words

    Liked by 1 person

  7. thedarknetizen
    May 2, 2018

    Really well-worded, Radhika! 🙂

    Liked by 2 people

  8. Very bold and beautiful

    Liked by 2 people

  9. Sifar
    May 3, 2018

    Beautiful! And it’s for own good to take a stand and walk out of such toxic relationship instead of suffering forever!! But it does take courage to do this which not all have sadly

    Liked by 3 people

  10. Meenakshi Sethi
    May 3, 2018

    Wonderfully used prompts and so emotional. In few lines you narrated whole story Radhika!

    Liked by 2 people

  11. balroop2013
    May 3, 2018

    Strong emotions, powerful words leading towards hope and strength. Wonderfully penned Radhika.

    Liked by 2 people

  12. Moushmi Radhanpara
    May 3, 2018

    Absolutely, truly wonderful. The courage that we all should own.

    Liked by 1 person

  13. calmkate
    May 3, 2018

    very well written, may all such women get the courage to actually leave!

    Liked by 1 person

    • radhikasreflection
      May 3, 2018

      Absolutely they should take that stand for themselves. Thanks Kate!

      Liked by 1 person

      • calmkate
        May 3, 2018

        Easy to say but I’ve seen how low the women are and how controlling and violent the partner … escaping sounds good but doing so is a lot harder!

        Liked by 2 people

      • radhikasreflection
        May 3, 2018

        Yes that’s why they require to garner courage. Many a times they don’t have the support of their family too. So it’s quite hard for them.

        Liked by 1 person

      • calmkate
        May 3, 2018

        Either family and friends don’t know, don’t believe or are too scared, it’s very difficult.

        Liked by 1 person

  14. vidur sahdev
    May 3, 2018

    Wonderful writing, Radhika!

    Liked by 2 people

  15. Kunal Thakore
    May 4, 2018

    Fabulous!!!

    Liked by 1 person

  16. Rupali
    May 4, 2018

    A good decision.

    Liked by 1 person

  17. Infinite Living
    May 5, 2018

    Beautifully composed using the prompts – know the resilient spirit indeed!

    Liked by 1 person

  18. Somali K Chakrabarti
    May 5, 2018

    Beautiful Radhika. Better to detach than prolong in a bad relationship.

    Liked by 1 person

  19. thewritewomanblog
    May 6, 2018

    Very powerful, Radhika. I loved the lines ‘The dark side of his personality

    adorns a nefarious cloak’. The words pain the darkness that reside inside him that has forced to move out.

    Liked by 1 person

  20. Shiva Malekopmath
    May 6, 2018

    Radhika these are stepwise steps of a Heart Broken.

    Five Words used with full Heartfelt Emotions.

    Regards 🎶💞🌷
    Shiva

    Liked by 1 person

  21. Brilliant composition of words and the end was awesome Radhika and apt with the poem heart broken and she will never ever return.

    Liked by 1 person

  22. stories569
    May 10, 2018

    Amazing work.

    Liked by 1 person

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