In response to secretkeeper’s weekly writing prompt #139, to use the following five words or their synonyms in a poem/fiction.
Write|Never|Place|Mark|Place
She writes her memoirs
with the ink of her tears
that pour out odious feelings
on an emotionally tainted paper.
The dark side of his personality
adorns a nefarious cloak
his wounds scar her soul
leaving her heart broken.
Reeling under the shock of his callous behavior
the place holds painful memories
she makes a promise to her resilient spirit
to walk out, never to return.
radhikasreflection 
Beautiful emotions depicted
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Thank you Tanvir!
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Beautiful
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Thanks Myrtle!
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Radhika, the quotes are seamlessly incoporated in your moving and powerful poem! Yeah…I’m glad she walked out, never to return!
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Thank you Annika. One should have the courage to walk out of such a miserable relationship.
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Alas, not always so easy…
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Agree, but the only way out to retain sanity!
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Emotions se bharpur …
.behtarin kavita.👌👌
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Dhanyawad Madhusudan 🙂
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She is so smart that she decided to walk out !
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Yes , brave and smart. It is futile holding on to this painful relationship. Thanks Megala !
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Such a poignant poem and an excellent attempt to include all the words
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Many thanks Megha 🙂
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Really well-worded, Radhika! 🙂
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Thanks a lot my friend 😊
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Very bold and beautiful
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Thank you Meenakshi!
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Beautiful! And it’s for own good to take a stand and walk out of such toxic relationship instead of suffering forever!! But it does take courage to do this which not all have sadly
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Yes. They continue trying to keep the relationship alive for various reasons or family pressure. Thank you!
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Wonderfully used prompts and so emotional. In few lines you narrated whole story Radhika!
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Thank you Meenakshi!
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Strong emotions, powerful words leading towards hope and strength. Wonderfully penned Radhika.
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Thank you so much Balroop!
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Absolutely, truly wonderful. The courage that we all should own.
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Yes to that 👍 Moushmi. Thanks!
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very well written, may all such women get the courage to actually leave!
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Absolutely they should take that stand for themselves. Thanks Kate!
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Easy to say but I’ve seen how low the women are and how controlling and violent the partner … escaping sounds good but doing so is a lot harder!
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Yes that’s why they require to garner courage. Many a times they don’t have the support of their family too. So it’s quite hard for them.
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Either family and friends don’t know, don’t believe or are too scared, it’s very difficult.
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Wonderful writing, Radhika!
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Thank you Vidur!
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Most welcome!
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Fabulous!!!
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Thanks Kunal 🙂
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A good decision.
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Yes Rupali! I am glad she took that decision.
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Beautifully composed using the prompts – know the resilient spirit indeed!
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Thank you Pragalbha!
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Most welcome Radhika.
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Beautiful Radhika. Better to detach than prolong in a bad relationship.
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Agree Somali. Thank you!
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Very powerful, Radhika. I loved the lines ‘The dark side of his personality
adorns a nefarious cloak’. The words pain the darkness that reside inside him that has forced to move out.
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Thank you so much Pranitha. Appreciate the feedback 😊
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Radhika these are stepwise steps of a Heart Broken.
Five Words used with full Heartfelt Emotions.
Regards 🎶💞🌷
Shiva
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Many thanks Shiva 🙂
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Brilliant composition of words and the end was awesome Radhika and apt with the poem heart broken and she will never ever return.
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Thank you so much for the appreciation Kamal 🙂
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Welcome always dear Radhika
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Amazing work.
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Thank you!!!
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As always, another masterpiece, so wonderfully crafted!
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Thank you so much!!
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