In response to secretkeeper.net’s weekly writing challenge #143, to use the following 5 words or their synonyms in a poem or fiction.
WALK|GAZE|SKY|ROAD|BRINK

On the verge of touching base,
at the final destination of life,
I wait for the whistle to blow,
my gaze drifts across the celestial heaven.
As the soul readies to embark
into the realms of the unknown,
the mind takes a walk down the road,
on the journey so far.
The memories kindle
a happy contented smile
that illuminates my heart!
It would be really great if one could say bid adieu like this ! 🙂
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Yes Megala. Same thoughts here!
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Beautiful 🙂
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Thanks Dahlia!
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Hopefully we all go down with a smile during that final countdown
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That would be just so lovely. It would also reflect that we lived our lives as happy souls.
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An enlightened adieu 🙂
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I hope I am blessed with one, when it is time!
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Ahh.. bliss, bliss… Loving this piece.. 💕😇👌👌👌
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Thank you 🙏
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I hope when the time comes it will be peaceful. My life has been a difficult one. I sometimes think I’d just like to have it over with. Then again, I think I still have a lot to do.
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Cara, life at times throws at us with difficult situations and puts us in a confusioned state of mind. At the same time it also teaches us important lessons to grow and evolve. So I guess we should have a positive frame of mind and hope that when the end comes it will be a peaceful one. Thanks for sharing your thoughts Cara.
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Beautiful description of journey of soul to meet the devine
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Thanks Kiran! Have a good day!
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The writings just beautiful ✨😊. You are very creative Radhika 😇
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Thanks a lot Abhijith 🙂.
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😇
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Such a profound piece of writing.
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Thank you Neha 🙂
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So deeply beautiful!
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Thank you Pragalbha!
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Most welcome Radhika 🙂
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Peaceful ending , to which everyone is working for
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Yes Meenakshi, then journey towards the destination becomes beautiful!
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