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Final Countdown!

In response to secretkeeper.net’s weekly writing challenge #143, to use the following 5 words or their synonyms in a poem or fiction.




On the verge of touching base,

at the final destination of life,

I wait for the whistle to blow,

my gaze drifts across the celestial heaven.

As the soul readies to embark

into the Β realms of the unknown,

the mind takes a walk down the road,

on the journey so far.

The memories kindle

a happy contented smile

that illuminates my heart!



25 comments on “Final Countdown!

  1. Megala
    May 28, 2018

    It would be really great if one could say bid adieu like this ! πŸ™‚

    Liked by 2 people

  2. Dahlia
    May 28, 2018

    Beautiful πŸ™‚

    Liked by 1 person

  3. Megha's World
    May 28, 2018

    Hopefully we all go down with a smile during that final countdown

    Liked by 1 person

  4. Team Wellness
    May 28, 2018

    An enlightened adieu πŸ™‚

    Liked by 1 person

  5. The Type-writer
    May 29, 2018

    Ahh.. bliss, bliss… Loving this piece.. πŸ’•πŸ˜‡πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘Œ

    Liked by 1 person

  6. Cara H (The Real Cie)
    May 29, 2018

    I hope when the time comes it will be peaceful. My life has been a difficult one. I sometimes think I’d just like to have it over with. Then again, I think I still have a lot to do.

    Liked by 1 person

    • radhikasreflection
      May 29, 2018

      Cara, life at times throws at us with difficult situations and puts us in a confusioned state of mind. At the same time it also teaches us important lessons to grow and evolve. So I guess we should have a positive frame of mind and hope that when the end comes it will be a peaceful one. Thanks for sharing your thoughts Cara.


  7. kiranmag
    May 29, 2018

    Beautiful description of journey of soul to meet the devine

    Liked by 1 person

  8. Abhijith Padmakumar
    May 29, 2018

    The writings just beautiful ✨😊. You are very creative Radhika πŸ˜‡

    Liked by 1 person

  9. mywords331
    May 29, 2018

    Such a profound piece of writing.

    Liked by 1 person

  10. Infinite Living
    May 30, 2018

    So deeply beautiful!

    Liked by 1 person

  11. Peaceful ending , to which everyone is working for

    Liked by 1 person

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