In response to Kat’s twittering tale # 93, to write a tale in 280 letters or less on the picture prompt given below.
When Sid heard of the magic phone which allowed one to speak to a dead person, he too joined the long queue of people, the only condition being, the phone rings when one touches it. Many tried in vain!
Sid picked up the ringing receiver with trembling hands.
“ Hello…..”
Letter count : 277
radhikasreflection 
Ohh…need moreee!!!!! such a cliff hanger!! 😣
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Glad you liked it Sifar….love to create a tale within the defined character count. Thanks 🙂
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…and it needs special talent which only few have…including you!! 😃 It was pulsating in so few words!! Lady Dan Brown!! 😀
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Whoa! Thanks for the huge compliment Sifar. But I have miles to go before I even come anywhere close to him 🙏
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Haha….im reading dan brown these days hence was excited to see the same style!! 😄 and loved it instantaneously! miles to go but atleast on the same path!!
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The comparison itself humbles me Sifar. So thanks again 🙏
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Hahaha nice and cute little story, Radhika.
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Thanks Kamal!
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Welcome Radhika.
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This is great😍
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Are u going to continue 😊
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Didn’t think about it 🙂
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H should 😊🌸
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Let me try…🙂 Thanks for the encouragement!
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👍👍will wait
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Continue the story rads
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Hmm… maybe. Let me think about it Deepa🙂
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This is awesome actually😍
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Thanks so much 😇
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It was his dead wife at the other end, the one he dreaded whle she was alive 🙂
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Haha! A good lead to take the story forward Reena 🙂👍
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Amazing👍😃
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Thank you!
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Nice story! 🙂
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Thanks Indhu 🙂
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This is great!! Waiting for more.. 😉
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Thanks so much Richa 🙂
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Nice story Radhika! What happened. Who was the other side… 😉
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It could be anyone 😉 based on how we want to move the story ahead!
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You definitely don’t want to say “sorry wrong number”! Good one Radhika! 🙂
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I hope not. Thanks Kat for the interesting prompt 🙂
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My pleasure. I love finding odd photos. They are so fun! 🙂
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Absolutely!!
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🙂 You leave us thinking very well always.
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🙂🙂
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Hey.. ‘yeh dil mangey more’.. it’s seems like the beginning of an awesome story… keep coming.. loved it.. 😇👌🏼💕
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Your comment encourages me to keep at it. Thanks a ton Debika 💖 Have a lovely day!
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Anytime Radhika.. 👍🏼😇💕
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Write a sequel 😊
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Will try. But quite a challenge to sustain the plot and suspense Shaloo.
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One of my poems could fit in perfectly to continue the story. Flash fiction is like that! Good one Radhika!
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That’s nice Balroop. If it is ok, maybe you could share it.
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But then what???? Pray do tell 🙂
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Anybody’s guess Moushumi….who do you want it to be ?
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Now, that I will have to think about. You tell me yours, please..
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Wil lhave to put on my thinking cap first 😁
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Good one, Radhika. Loved it 👌
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Many thanks Deepika 🙂
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I like to have this magic phone, where can I buy?! 🙂
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Haha! A good question Megala 😉.
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Now you have got me thinking..maybe they should increase the word count..good for us readers…
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😁😁
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Wow, talented Radhika.
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Thanks Rupali 🙏
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I would like to know the rest of the story 🙂
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Will have the think how to take it forward Piyali 🙂
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Please invest some time in it as the plot seems quite promising. Can make a good suspense thriller
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Thanks for your encouragement Piyali. But hesitant as I am not sure if I can do a good job with it.
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Please give it a try. Write like no one is going to read it ever. I am sure with your descriptive style of writing, you’ll do something amazing with it. Sometimes we underestimate ourselves 🙂
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Thanks for all the motivation you are giving me Piyali. Will give it a try soon!
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All the best 🙂 and my pleasure
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🙏💖
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Nice suspense.
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Thanks Sadaf!
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