In response to secretkeeper.nets prompt # 159, to write a poem/fiction using the 5 prompt words!
WAY|PINE|CONFESS|NAME|PARCHED
The gloomy dreary morning,
predicted another dull day at work
until you walked in,
bringing in a swirl of sunshine
your dazzling smile
froze my heart beat
the scent of the wild springs
filling my heart with desires,
sanity seemed to have lost its way
in an impassioned labyrinth
your name conjured strange sensations in me
untamed like a wildfire,
the parched soul pined to hold on to you,
feel the warmth of your touch,
to drown in your beauty forever,
I must confess, it was love at first sight!
Lovely❤
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Thank you 🙂
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Wah! 🙂
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Shukriya K!
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Aha, the beauty of love and what that glance can do the beating heart has been so beautifully penned.
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Thanks Megha. It’s a feeling hard to put to words😊
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Well articulated first love! Radhika, your approach to the prompt words is perfect as they flow naturally and are loaded.
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Smiling and humbled Balroop. Thanks so much 🙂
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You truly use prompt words amazingly well 🙂 Beautiful how you painted the feeling of first love in words!
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Thanks a bunch Pragalbha 🙂. Glad to hear that !
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Lovely read😊👍💞
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Many thanks Hardip 🙂
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This is absolutely beautiful – the poetry itself, but even more precious for the way you wove those chosen words in it. Bravo! 🙂
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Thanks a lot Krishnapriya for the lovely comment. Feeling elated 🤗😇
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i join you – in your smiles. 🙂
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Most welcome dear 💖
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How exciting it would be to go to work if you have someone there who makes your heart skip a beat!! So beautifully penned!!
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Indeed Shaloo 😊. Thank you so much!
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Beautiful…enjoyed reading it 🙂
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Many thanks Indira 🙂
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Just beautiful 💕
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Thanks Deepika 🙂
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Lovely smooth flow to this piece
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Thank you Dahlia!!
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Fantastic poetry, Radhika and the ending lines were so beautiful it felt the whole poem was in those two stanzas. Simplicity and tenderness in the picture too. Lovely.
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Thanks a lot dear Kamal 💞
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Welcome dear Radhika.
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I can’t stop reading this beautiful piece, again and again. The imagery the words create pulls me under… Lovely!!!
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Thanks Ritwik for the generous appreciation!!
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Really great reading your blog!
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You’ve made my day Ritwik. Thanks again 🙏
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Pleasure’s all mine…
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Love at first sight, always the best
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😊😊👍
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so well portrayed.. just like beauty forever
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Thanks a lot 🙂
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Such a lovely poem 🙂
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Thanks Neha 😊
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You’re welcome, Radhika 🙂
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Feel happy to read your lovely posts ma’am.
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Thanks so much Meenakshi. Good to see you back after a long time. Hope you are doing good!
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💝😇
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😊🙏
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😇😇
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So so beautiful ❤️
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Thank you Shantanu!
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My pleasure always
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Very nice poem Radhika
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Thank you!
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So beautiful!❤
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Thanks Richa 🙂
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A perfect definition for the words – love at first sight.
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Thanks dear P ❤ !
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So this is how it feels! I get it now!! 😄
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Haha! I hope I get to read your poem about your experience on that. Good luck friend 👍💙
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Haha….sure once I experience it I will write about it…till then bear my sad poems 😂
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