In response to Ronovanwrites haiku challenge #223, to use the prompt words
Rise & Fall!
Barrage of words spew
when emotions rise and fall
sanity succumbs!
Life’s failure looms large
strong resilient spirit
rise of the phoenix!
Twin Haikus!
In response to Ronovanwrites haiku challenge #223, to use the prompt words
Rise & Fall!
Barrage of words spew
when emotions rise and fall
sanity succumbs!
Life’s failure looms large
strong resilient spirit
rise of the phoenix!
radhikasreflection 
Superb Radhika!!
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Thanks Kranti!
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My pleasure 😊
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Fabulous Radhika!! Undoubtedly you are best in this form of expression
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Ahh….that’s really kind of you to say Tanvir. Thank you 🙏
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My pleasure
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Brilliant …loved them both
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Many thanks Sakshi!
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My pleasure 😊
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The first one is more powerful Radhika, as it is eloquent about words that reign. Thanks for saying so much within this short form of poetry.
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Thank you so much Balroop!
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You are soo good with these Haiku snippets. Loved it
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Many thanks Shantanu 🙂
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My pleasure
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Very beautiful composition.It’s not easy to write.👌👌
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Thank you so much Madhusudan 🙂
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These are both terrific,Radhika … saying so much within the brevity of the haiku. I hope sanity does not succumb!
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Thank a bunch Annika. Good to see you here after long….how have you been?
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I’m very well, Radhika and sorry for not coming by more often! Life, writing, travels, travails has meant I’m less on WP but by no means absent! Hope all is well with you. Xx
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Glad that you are doing good Annika. No worries dear. XOXO😊
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Both so beautiful …as always 🙂
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Thank you Pragalbha 🙂
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Absolutely wonderful!💖
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Gratitude 🙏
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Great share friend 💐
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Thanks Ravindra!
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My pleasure 🌻
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A lovely tapestry of words, Radhika! 🙂
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Thanks a lot Indira 🙂
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Both of these are great, as are the images.
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Thank you so much Pat!
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Such power packed & thought provoking haikus!!
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These are brilliant
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Thanks a ton dear 💟
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I love both of them, but the second one seems to be sending me hope and faith more than the previous one, which I need more than anything; now.
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We all need to kindle that dose of hope from time to time in life Moushumi. I am so glad that my words usher in that positive feeling for you.
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Very nice
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Thanks Sunil!
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Wow! Fantastic twin haikus!!
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Many thanks Megala 🙂
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Lovely expressions, Radhika.
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Thanks Pranitha!
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