In response to Helene’s What do you see weekly challenge, to write a post the pic prompt.
The tiny feet caper merrily
walks on the path of life
enjoying the wondrous sight
with curiosity and awe,
discovers boundless treasures
falters, learns and assimilates
savoring the magic of nature
rearing to hold infinity in his palms,
Before,
his sentinels grab him, to cast him into a mold
burden his tender shoulders with a load too heavy
bundle him on an assembly line
stamp him with fear and anxiety
confine his growth within the societal norms
rob him of his innocence, shred his soul,
churn out an end product – a successful living robot!
A lovely message Radhika! Let them explore the world they want to…hope all parents are listening.
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Thanks Balroop. I seriously wish the educators and parents take heed to the cries of the overburdened children.
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Starting from the pure source, replete with love and colours – as the magical picture suggests, – to the pernicious reality of life today, replete with equivocal (in)humanity – your poem is a masterpiece of these times, Radhika.
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Thank you so much dear Isha. I feel very saddened to see children forced to give up their childhood behind books or various classes. The entire system needs an absolute makeover.
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Wowww beautiful flow of emotions…really amazing read… totally agree with your words👍
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This speaks so true of the pressure our kids go through these days. Taking the chance to let them grow at their own pace is as good as robbing their innocence.
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Absolutely agree with you Megha. At times I feel so guilty of containing them within a specified framework.
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Yes we all are guilty of that to certain extent but the idea is to have the awareness about it so that we do not restrain them completely.
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Sorry state of affairs but u expressed the stark reality so well👍🏻
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Thank you!
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Wow, wow & wow !! You have summarised it so beautifully 👌
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Many thanks Deepika!
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A sage message Radhika, one to send to all parents of this world, allow your children to be children. We have sad and challenging circumstances awaiting our children into today’s world. Being a parent, as well as having been a child at one time, the same process has been alive in every generation. We mold them to our expectations, and it goes on, and on.
Thank you so much for this beautiful post. It is a reminder, a blessed reflection on how we too often behave unfavorably.
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You summarised it so well Hélène. Well, I thought this issue is faced predominantly in India. If it is so in other countries as well, then some serious thought needs to go into it. Else we will be producing smart zombies the world over.
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India and everywhere else in the world, it is the way humans have raised children for centuries, to be someone, to be this and be that, expectations no matter what caste, creed or nation, rich or poor. It is more so in today’s age though, we are moving too fast into the robot age taking over all manual work and personal experience to us is being lost.
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Can’t agree more with you Hélène. I hope people realise that all this is a kind of negative growth and amend ways before it is too late.
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Right on Radhika.
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Woww beautiful flow of emotions…really amazing read👍
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Thank you so much Jyo 🙂
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Beautifully written in the world and I love it…😊😉
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Thank you 🙂
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Deep, insightful, inspiring, thoughtful.. well done Radhika.. true that.. let’s not rob them off their innocence.. loved it.. thankyou.. 😇💕
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Thanks Debika. Unfortunately , right now we are guilty of doing so.
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Yes, more or less.. and unfortunately enough, the same happened with us too..
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Yes, agree. But the sad part is, the cycle is still continuing.
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Yes, but let’s keep hope.. there’s always a bright sun at the end of the horizon darkest.. 🤞🏼👍🏼😇💕
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Thanks Debika for showing hope. At times frustration makes one adopt a pessimistic outlook.💖😊
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True that..!! Can’t agree more.. it happens for sure.. I can understand dear.. 👍🏼🙂
Loved your post, points thoughtfully put..👏🏼😊👌🏼
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🙏🙏💖
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Unfortunate reality!!!
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Yes it is Shaloo!
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That’s really thoughtful… Let us try to save the new gen from all these society norms..
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Yes Akhila, we all should strive to actively bring about this change.
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Well written Radhika.. Explaining the threat of future…
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Thanks a lot Chiru 🙂
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True words so well composed on the innocence that is lost by the child as he or she grows up, overburdened beyond his means and finally you are just living and breathing robot. Lovely picture too.
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That is exactly what is happening today. Most children are so stressed out. Innocence and playful banter seems to be missing as they grow.
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Yes dear Radhika we in todays world and our children have totally lost it and who knows where are we going. All are simply stressed out and walking as Zombies with no destination in mind.
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Magnificent Radhika
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Thanks Tanvir!
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I feel the same when I see children these days going for tuition classes. After a long day at school, how much can they take in? A rat race.
Very well expressed Radhika.
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Thank you Lakshmi. I have seen children who are still in kindergarten going for tuition. That really shook me up. Where are we heading to, is a question I keep asking and what price are we paying for it?
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As usual, a stunning splay of words, Radhika! ❤ Loved it!
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Thank you Deepika 🙂
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Beautiful interpretation from the pic, Radhika!
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Thanks a lot Indira!
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A beautifully worded sad reality, Radhika! 👍
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Thanks Vidur 🙂
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So beautiful poem Radhika!!!
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Thank you Paulo!
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Your words always deliver reality very strong and beautiful, a successful living robot good lesson for every parent. I don’t want to do this for my children
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Thanks Meenakshi. Neither of us want our children to be like that, but we all fall prey to the unreasonable laws of societal framework.
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stamp him with fear and anxiety – very sad that this is so true. I was discussing this exact same yesterday, your poetry brought it out so beautifully.
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Thanks Pragalbha.
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Beautiful presentation…its the truth of life, time will snatch innocence gradually.
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Thanks Jyotirmoy!
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It is so painful to find the parents “burden his tender shoulders with a load too heavy”.
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Exactly what I feel Megala.
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Exactly what I feel Megala!
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Sadly true
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Yes Paul!
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Aww I feel for the poor child! Btw well penned 🙂
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Thanks Dahlia 🙂
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Thanks Meenakshi. Will check it out 🙂
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Kindly check the link for the white elephant challenge
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This was really thoughtful Radhika, and you said it so brilliantly.
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Glad you liked it Moushmi. Thanks 🙂
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This is beautiful
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Thank you Shantanu 🙂
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My pleasure always
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A very thoughtful response to the prompt, well done.
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Thank you Bernie!
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Brilliant!
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🙏🙏
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