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Magical Ocean!

In response to secretkeeper.net’s challenge # 172, to use the five prompt words in a poem or story.



A bout of hysterical flare up

sends me scurrying to the

shoreless ocean bed, where

I seek solace to pacify the heated mind.

Perched on the rocky cliffs,

gazing at the magic of the shimmering waves

listening to the gentle whispers of the breeze

sets me free from the emotional bondage.

The halcyon blue expanse, lulls the untamed ire.

Amid the naked waters, silent sands

and moments of solitude, I attain a sense of peace,

drowning in its wondrous depth.

42 comments on “Magical Ocean!

  1. boundlessblessingsblog
    December 18, 2018

    Mystical words of the magical ocean, Radhika and in silence I can find peace drowning in her wondrous depth. Awesome poem and loved the picture too.

    Liked by 1 person

  2. krishnapriya108
    December 18, 2018

    Ooooh! And you have me drowning in the magic of your wondrous words. Bravo Radhika โ€“ yet again. Love to partake of the little treats you share with us โ€“ from your creative pen. Thank you so much for sharing. ๐Ÿ™‚

    Liked by 2 people

  3. blindzanygirl
    December 18, 2018

    Absolutely beautiful

    Liked by 1 person

  4. Jyo
    December 18, 2018

    Absolutely NOMNOM ๐Ÿ‘


  5. Megala
    December 18, 2018

    Wow! Awesome!! Seriously I have not expected such a beautiful poem when I look at the prompts initially. ๐Ÿ™‚

    Liked by 1 person

  6. BeingAlive
    December 18, 2018

    This is beautifulโ€ฆtotally in sync with the oceanic beauty embossed in your wonderful words๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป

    Liked by 1 person

  7. The Typewriter
    December 18, 2018

    Moments of solitude, sense of peace.. waah.. loved it.. thanks for sharing..!! ๐Ÿ˜‡๐Ÿ˜‡

    Liked by 1 person

  8. Indira
    December 18, 2018

    Beautiful composition, Radhika!

    Liked by 1 person

  9. Kranti
    December 18, 2018

    wowโ€ฆ.waves, breeze, solitude, peace and your magical words to define them.. Amazingly beautiful!!

    Liked by 1 person

  10. Megha's World
    December 19, 2018

    You have beautifully defined the magical features of an ocean.

    Liked by 1 person

  11. Akhila
    December 19, 2018

    waves always have that soothing effect which you portrayed most elegantly radhika

    Liked by 1 person

  12. scorpio1987Sajal
    December 19, 2018

    Its looking so surrealโ€ฆBrilliant

    Liked by 1 person

  13. Maniparna Sengupta Majumder
    December 20, 2018

    The prompt words are wonderfully used to create a deep, soothing poetic formโ€ฆ ๐Ÿ™‚

    The picture is beautiful too.

    Liked by 1 person

  14. almeidadepaulo
    December 20, 2018

    So beautiful poem Radhika, thanks for sharing!!!

    Liked by 1 person

  15. Kunal Thakore
    December 22, 2018


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  16. Jyotirmoy Sarkar
    December 27, 2018

    Awesome take on the prompt words.

    Liked by 1 person

  17. singing.mermaid
    March 13, 2019



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