In response to secretkeeper’s prompt # 176, to use the 5 words in a poem/fiction.
HUE|DANCE|BREAK|INNER|LOST
I have attempted an Haibun for the same.

I break away from the frenzy of the turbid city life and head towards nature, to be lost in its ever welcoming arms. As I cross the city limits the landscape beckons me with an alluring gentleness. The early morning rays make a dazzling appearance behind the tangerine hues of the horizon. The green meadows revel in a golden glow of the radiant light.
I walk bare feet on the wet blades of grass, my hands feel the pregnant buds ready to bloom. I inhale the sweet fragrance of the flowers, and admire the meandering butterflies, as every sense organ of my body is recharged. The mind dances with delight at the tranquil surroundings which envelope me. I am awake to every passing moment as the energy from the intangible and sublime elements of nature converge into my inner most core. My heart sways to the soulful melody of nature’s song without words. These moments of solitude in nature is my sanctuary away from the humdrum of life.
Nature’s bonanza
kaleidoscopic marvel
rejuvenation!
Haibun is a Japanese genre of combining prose with a haiku (5\7\5 syllables). The key to the art of haibun is the graceful pairing of poem and prose, where the poem links to the prose yet shifts away from it.
Simple pleasures so beautifully put in prose & poetic form!
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Thanks K. Some how we lose out on these simple pleasures in the busy city life.
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Yup! And that’s why I run away 😉
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Haha! True that 🙂
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Absolutely amazing. I feel nature too. Such a good write
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Thank you Lorraine!
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Splendid poetic words Radhika and loved the apt picture of simply roaming free in the green grass with bare feet and silence. Too good.
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Thank you Kamal. I have always found nature to be magical!
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Yes absolutely true, Radhika. Welcome always.
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Please read my first post
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Will read soon!
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Can you attach a link to the post?
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Yes
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This is a lovely write. “my hands feel the pregnant buds ready to bloom.” Never thought of it like this before. It is beautiful.
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Thank you Muntazir. Appreciate your feedback 🙂
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My pleasure
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Absolutely beautiful
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Many thanks Sakshi 🙂
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My pleasure
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Ii is a delightful experience to read this beautiful haibun!
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So happy to hear that Megala. Thanks!
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Wonderful being in the midst of nature and enjoying the bliss. Well captured in prose and poetry 👌
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Thank you Deepika 🙂
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Mother Nature is always amazing….and such a beautiful write up Radhika…loved it❣️ great pic by the way👍
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Many thanks Jyo. Yes, mother nature always mesmerizes 💖
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Mind blowing
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Thank you Rajani!
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It was a great pleasure reading such magnificent post
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Thanks a ton Tanvir 😊
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Peaceful moments to forge a deeper connection with Inner Self.. Loved It Radhika!!
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This is superbly beautiful!❤
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Thanks a bunch Richa 🙂
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Thrilled to see you in a lovely new avatar..the site looks magnificent with your jewelled blogs!
I could inhale the beauty of nature with all its freshness.
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Glad to see you in my space after long Sunita. Thanks so much 🙂
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It is the prettiest piece I have read in a while…
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Thanks for the lovely compliment. Appreciate that 🙂
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Your words shows how much you love nature. Everything sounds so beautiful and refreshing 💕💕💕
Loved it!!!
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Your talent is reaching new heights Radhika! Its a treat to read the articulate prose and poetry combination. 💥👍
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Your comment warms my heart Meenakshi. Thank you so much 💖
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This is so beautiful
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Thanks Shantanu 🙂
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My pleasure
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So beautiful Radhilka!!!
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Many thanks Paulo. How you haven’t posted anything on your blog since long?
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Yes, rejuvenation 🙂
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Indeed it is 🙂
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🙂
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What a beautiful write up.. So amazing .. City life – busy life needs this break i guess
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Yes. It is a recharge for the body and mind. Thanks Ruchi!
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“Pregnant buds ready to bloom”, you are an amazing thinker. So beautiful and peaceful read.
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Thanks Meenakshi for your generous appreciation 😊
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Beautiful!
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Thanks Abhay!
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This was such a treat for the eyes Radhika. Your beautiful and mesmerizing words transported me to this world of gorgeous beauty. Well penned.
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Thanks a lot for your encouragement Megha 🙂
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My pleasure Radhika.
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Aha Radhika!!! I am in love with you now. I need more of it.
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Honoured Nikita. Thanks dear ❤️
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Very nice Radhika, will visit again.
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Thank you Derek
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