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The Plan!

In response to Kat’s twittering tale #127, write a tale on the prompt in 280 letters or less.

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The rain lashed against the menacing wind.  A few stray dogs howled  giving the deserted station an eerie feel. The train was all set to chug along.  At the stroke of midnight, Alberto lit a cigarette, checked his pistol and boarded the train. It was time to carry out his plan.

Letter count : 277

 

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51 comments on “The Plan!

  1. Bible blogger
    March 12, 2019

    Wow. That’s fantastic job.

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  2. Lovely work by you

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  3. thelonelyauthorblog
    March 12, 2019

    Good story

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  4. Vrunda
    March 12, 2019

    I wonder what happened next…..😅
    Love your words Radhika.. they’re creating the effect perfectly!

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  5. The Typewriter
    March 12, 2019

    So apt and perfect, loving the rhythm here.. well done Radhika.. 😇💕

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  6. swalia
    March 12, 2019

    Picture perfect!!!

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  7. Moushmi Radhanpara
    March 12, 2019

    Absolutely well done!

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  8. Betul Erbasi
    March 12, 2019

    Nice! Very concise but deep!

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  9. iScriblr
    March 12, 2019

    This is super! Brilliantly done!👏👏

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  10. very atmospheric, great take 🙂

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  11. DeepikasRamblings
    March 12, 2019

    Wow, how do you come up with such novel ideas. You can author a book, Radhika !!

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  12. Kat Myrman
    March 12, 2019

    Oooh, very mysterious. You set the scene so well!

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  13. Kranti
    March 12, 2019

    Superb!! 👏

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  14. almeidadepaulo
    March 13, 2019

    I love how your words flow Radhika, well done!!!

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  15. Infinite Living
    March 13, 2019

    Perfection how you do this !! 🙂

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  16. anuragbakhshi
    March 13, 2019

    Nice atmosphere-building.

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  17. Yasmin
    March 13, 2019

    👏👏👏
    Brilliant!!!

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  18. Firstly I was so happy to see a tale. Truly I love all your short stories. I believe collectively you can release them as a book. All are wonderful.

    (My daughter is having speech trouble ma’am, daily she will color something like this, so to encourage her I did it)

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    • radhikasreflection
      March 14, 2019

      Thank you so much for always supporting and appreciating my work Meenakshi. You are very kind 💖.
      Regarding your daughter I am sure you must be taking all medical help as required. But I am very happy that you are encouraging her in artistic pursuits too. Art is truly therapeutic. With the right guidance she can shine in creative field. God bless ❤️❤️

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  19. Megha's World
    March 14, 2019

    oh dear..the start of a thriller.

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  20. Ennle Madresan
    March 14, 2019

    I could feel the tension and determination.

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  21. boundlessblessingsblog
    March 15, 2019

    Wow a great story and an apt picture too of the guy silently smoking a cigarette

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  23. Sifar
    March 20, 2019

    Your short tales are so agonisingly thrilling!! Thrilling because they are such a cliffhanger…!! And agonising because that’s all we get to read and there is no more to them!!!!! 😩😩
    Want to read more till the end!!! 😭

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  24. daneelyunus
    March 21, 2019

    Nice one Radhika

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