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Muted Voices!

In response to Kat’s twittering tale # 130, to write a tale on the pic prompt in 280 letters or less.

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When Adi introduced his best friend Jai to his bride Uma, they froze.

Recalling their chance meeting on a train journey where their eyes and heart embraced but  their words remained shy and muted. If only they gave their emotions a voice then, today would be a different story.

Letter count : 280

 

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56 comments on “Muted Voices!

  1. Megala
    April 2, 2019

    Beautiful tale!

    Liked by 2 people

  2. Shahz
    April 2, 2019

    Nice..I felt warmth in that !!

    Liked by 2 people

  3. DeepikasRamblings
    April 2, 2019

    Oh…That’s so sad ☹️

    Liked by 2 people

  4. Asha Seth
    April 2, 2019

    Sweet and a heart-tugger.

    Liked by 2 people

  5. Hélène - Willow Poetry
    April 2, 2019

    Ah, sad. Indeed, if they had spoken then….

    Liked by 2 people

  6. Jyotirmoy Sarkar
    April 2, 2019

    Awesome write up…loved it a lot.

    Liked by 3 people

  7. almeidadepaulo
    April 2, 2019

    Fantastic Radhika, I don’t know how you can write such a deep tale in a few words!!!

    Liked by 3 people

  8. Megha's World
    April 2, 2019

    Brilliant…once again.

    Liked by 2 people

  9. Anubhav Sinha
    April 2, 2019

    Well, I can relate it to my life. 3 Years went, 😣😣

    Liked by 2 people

  10. Shantanu Baruah
    April 2, 2019

    I love this – short and sweet

    Liked by 2 people

  11. Kranti
    April 2, 2019

    Expressing our feelings is as important as identifying them! Absolutely brilliant!!

    Liked by 2 people

  12. Kat Myrman
    April 3, 2019

    Wonderful tale. One has to wonder why fate brought them together again…

    Liked by 2 people

  13. Rupali
    April 3, 2019

    Ah! beautiful.

    Liked by 2 people

  14. Infinite Living
    April 3, 2019

    oh that’s going to be a bit difficult to resolve …well done! 🙂

    Liked by 2 people

  15. iScriblr
    April 3, 2019

    Oh my, this is heartfelt!❤️

    Liked by 2 people

  16. krishnapriya108
    April 3, 2019

    Wow! You are so creative and brilliant – and i am so lucky to get to watch, read and enjoy. Thank you, dear Radhika for this magical tale.

    Liked by 2 people

  17. Jyo
    April 3, 2019

    How sad 😥

    Liked by 2 people

  18. vidur sahdev
    April 4, 2019

    Aah…that is a sad tale, Radhika! Kudos for tempting the mind to wander to create the rest of the backdrop to this little scene. 🙂👍

    Liked by 2 people

  19. Yasmin Khan
    April 4, 2019

    Aww💔💔💔

    Liked by 1 person

  20. Beautiful tale shared

    Liked by 2 people

  21. Chiru
    April 4, 2019

    Wonderful tale… Often we don’t voice ourselves and then it becomes too late..

    Liked by 2 people

  22. Bhavana Madbhavi
    April 5, 2019

    Nailed it !! Perfect …simply superb😍

    Liked by 2 people

  23. Kunal Thakore
    April 6, 2019

    Yeh toh meri kahani bhi ho sakti hai! 😉

    Liked by 2 people

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  25. ankur2702
    April 12, 2019

    Lovely writing

    Liked by 1 person

  26. Sifar
    April 14, 2019

    That was sad! Many times we hold ourself back when we shouldnt and repent later!!

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