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Transformation!

In response to Helene’s What do you see Challenge?

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Within the confines of my body

hounded by insecurities

I suffocate, struggle, stagnate

captive in the fortress of my mind.

In isolation I fight the avalanche of thoughts

absorbing the tremors of after effect.

The reverberations distinctly audible

in the empty silence of the soul.

The clock traverses its path

in moments of reflection ,

I unlearn and clear the cocoons.

The cloak of tangled mess drops,

metamorphosis happens.

The puzzles of the jigsaw of life

fall into place

completing a beautiful picture of

 Transformation!

 

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63 comments on “Transformation!

  1. The Typewriter
    May 23, 2019

    A marvel of its kind Radhika.. so so well done.. amazing.. exquisite.. 👍🏼😊👒👌🏼👏🏼👏🏼
    Thank you for sharing.. 😇💕

    Liked by 3 people

  2. Muntazir
    May 23, 2019

    Beautifully inked

    Liked by 1 person

  3. vishalbheeroo
    May 23, 2019

    You always pen such magnificent words with rare elan and effortlessness. Flawless thoughts translated into words.

    Liked by 3 people

  4. Beautifully penned Radhika

    Liked by 1 person

  5. Sakshi
    May 23, 2019

    Wow ……. I’d say this is one of my favorites from you❤️

    Liked by 1 person

  6. boundlessblessingsblog
    May 23, 2019

    Stunning and what a marvelous way of transformation, Radhika. The poem was awesome and the picture said it all.

    Liked by 1 person

  7. Hélène - Willow Poetry
    May 23, 2019

    Such magnificent transformation. You wrote this with such clarity that I felt each and every line, experiencing the process through your words up until the very end finally reaching transformation.
    Excellent piece Radhika.

    Liked by 1 person

  8. Moushmi Radhanpara
    May 23, 2019

    Oh wow, this was simply wonderful!!

    Liked by 1 person

  9. Jyo
    May 23, 2019

    Nice write up and beautiful flow of words👍

    Liked by 1 person

  10. Indira
    May 23, 2019

    The theme is well brought out through your lines, Radhika!!

    Liked by 1 person

  11. positivesideofcoin
    May 23, 2019

    Beautifully penned 💝😇

    Liked by 1 person

  12. thelonelyauthorblog
    May 23, 2019

    Powerful, profound, and beautifully expressed.

    Liked by 1 person

  13. iScriblr
    May 24, 2019

    This is brilliantly written! Beautiful!❤️

    Liked by 1 person

  14. Infinite Living
    May 24, 2019

    The photo and the your words offer such a wonderful description of the process of transformation – absolutely beautifully done.

    Liked by 2 people

  15. Shantanu Baruah
    May 24, 2019

    Absolutely stunning, the way to transform

    Liked by 1 person

  16. Megala
    May 24, 2019

    Wow! Awesome! i enjoyed reading it particularly this phrase, “absorbing the tremors of after effect”.

    Liked by 1 person

  17. faithfullyyours2017
    May 24, 2019

    wow radhika…so intricately written… i actually felt the metamorphosis from a caterpillar into a butterfly…you really have a way with words!!!!

    Liked by 1 person

  18. Very nice…

    Like

  19. Tanusri sen
    May 24, 2019

    Wonderful response

    Liked by 1 person

  20. Life said in very deep and beautiful way 👏👏👏

    Liked by 1 person

  21. Abhay
    May 25, 2019

    Radhika ji, You have a knack of producing such fine writings that too with ease and frequently. Good Job!

    Liked by 2 people

  22. Sifar
    May 25, 2019

    Beautiful words!!
    “The reverberations distinctly audible
    in the empty silence of the soul.”
    Loved this line!! ❤️

    Liked by 2 people

  23. almeidadepaulo
    May 26, 2019

    Wow Radhika, so powerful, thanks for sharing!!!

    Liked by 1 person

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  25. pvcann
    May 27, 2019

    Yes, a poem about how we struggle and evolve, love this.

    Liked by 1 person

  26. Shiva Malekopmath
    May 28, 2019

    What actually happens in the mind distinctively described and the need for Transformation felt.
    Bringing it into Poetry form is not everyone’s talent Radhika.
    I endorse this thought and recommend it for anybody’s Transformation.
    Shiva

    💞🙏

    Liked by 1 person

  27. Kranti
    May 28, 2019

    Exquisite ❤️….. .. I don’t think I can express how beautiful this is!

    Like

  28. ESP
    May 29, 2019

    this is beautiful, transformation and evolution

    Liked by 1 person

  29. Sunshiny SA, Kavitha
    June 5, 2019

    Beautifully said Radhika. 🌺

    Liked by 1 person

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