The broken keys!
Twin haiku’s in response to Susi’s weekly haiku challenge # 28
The fragmented keys
privy to turgid ego
life plagued by regrets!
The once resplendent,
musical keys uprooted
heart broken in love!
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Wow ….. Great haikus
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Thank you Sakshi!
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My pleasure 😊
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These are lovely, Radhika!! 🙂
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Thanks Susi. Such a intriguing picture!
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*an
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Glad you like it!
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Nice
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Thanks Muntazir!
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Radhika, two terrific haikus in response to this image! I’ll show my son this image and reckon as a pianist he’ll be pained to see that fragmented heartbroken piano! 😀
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Thanks Annika. This picture piqued my curiosity too. Wonderful to know that your son is a pianist. Does he play at a professional level or pursue it as a hobby?
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He is just starting university in September so the music is a keen interest / hobby … he composes as well as writing the lyrics! He thought the photo was cool!
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That’s lovely Annika. Music is such a wonderful hobby to pursue. Composing and writing lyrics too is so amazing. Your house must be echoing with some lovely music.
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Heart wrenching, yet so beautiful.. ❤️
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Thank you Debika 💖
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😇😇
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nice, and intriguing pic
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Beautiful!
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Thank you!
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Wow, so apt and true. Loved both of them 👍
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Gratitude Deepika 🙂
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Fantastic poem, Radhika and the picture was awesome. Poor piano all cut into two by this big tree. Lovely poetry.
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Many thanks Kamal.
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Welcome Radhika
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Lovely verses, Radhika!!
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Thank you Indira!
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But it has also been said that : to have loved and lost is better than having never been in love 😊💕 I am the eternal romantic 😊
Beautiful poem with a beautiful pic
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Thank you Ashok ji. I agree to your point. But the phase of being heartbroken in love, is quite difficult to deal with 🙂
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Yes Radhika. It is. But one day, maybe much later in life, we shall look back at this with more peace and maybe happiness too 😊
Do read my post : Love is a One Way Street
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I am sure we will with the passing seasons Ashok ji. Experience and maturity mellows a person’s outlook to life.
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https://ashokwahi.wordpress.com/2019/03/31/love-is-a-one-way-street-%e2%9d%a4%ef%b8%8f%e2%9d%a4%ef%b8%8f/
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Thanks for the link. Read and commented on it 👍
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Beautiful twin haiku!
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Thanks Megala!
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Lovely. Touching
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Thank you Drew!
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Just terrific. Intriguing lines, Radhika.
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Thank you Moushumi!
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So intricately decorated with your words – the picture is also so beautiful
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Gratitude Shantanu!
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My absolute pleasure
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Incredibly Beautiful!!
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Thanks Pragalbha!
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Vigorous and broken, such wonderful expressions!
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Thank you Lisa!
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Both are brilliant, R!!!
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Many thanks K!
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Beautiful!
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Thanks Saania ☺️
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