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The broken keys!

Twin haiku’s in response to Susi’s weekly haiku challenge # 28

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The fragmented keys

privy to turgid ego

life plagued by regrets!

 

The once resplendent,

musical keys uprooted

heart broken in love!

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50 comments on “The broken keys!

  1. Sakshi
    July 17, 2019

    Wow ….. Great haikus

    Liked by 1 person

  2. Susi Bocks
    July 17, 2019

    These are lovely, Radhika!! πŸ™‚

    Liked by 1 person

  3. Muntazir
    July 17, 2019

    Nice

    Liked by 1 person

  4. Annika Perry
    July 17, 2019

    Radhika, two terrific haikus in response to this image! I’ll show my son this image and reckon as a pianist he’ll be pained to see that fragmented heartbroken piano! πŸ˜€

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    • radhikasreflection
      July 17, 2019

      Thanks Annika. This picture piqued my curiosity too. Wonderful to know that your son is a pianist. Does he play at a professional level or pursue it as a hobby?

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      • Annika Perry
        July 17, 2019

        He is just starting university in September so the music is a keen interest / hobby … he composes as well as writing the lyrics! He thought the photo was cool!

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      • radhikasreflection
        July 17, 2019

        That’s lovely Annika. Music is such a wonderful hobby to pursue. Composing and writing lyrics too is so amazing. Your house must be echoing with some lovely music.

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  5. The Typewriter
    July 17, 2019

    Heart wrenching, yet so beautiful.. ❀️

    Liked by 1 person

  6. ESP
    July 17, 2019

    nice, and intriguing pic

    Like

  7. Ink of Musing
    July 17, 2019

    Beautiful!

    Liked by 1 person

  8. DeepikasRamblings
    July 17, 2019

    Wow, so apt and true. Loved both of them πŸ‘

    Liked by 1 person

  9. boundlessblessingsblog
    July 17, 2019

    Fantastic poem, Radhika and the picture was awesome. Poor piano all cut into two by this big tree. Lovely poetry.

    Liked by 2 people

  10. Indira
    July 17, 2019

    Lovely verses, Radhika!!

    Liked by 1 person

  11. ashok
    July 17, 2019

    But it has also been said that : to have loved and lost is better than having never been in love πŸ˜ŠπŸ’• I am the eternal romantic 😊
    Beautiful poem with a beautiful pic

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  12. Megala
    July 17, 2019

    Beautiful twin haiku!

    Liked by 1 person

  13. thelonelyauthorblog
    July 19, 2019

    Lovely. Touching

    Liked by 1 person

  14. Moushmi Radhanpara
    July 19, 2019

    Just terrific. Intriguing lines, Radhika.

    Liked by 1 person

  15. Shantanu Baruah
    July 19, 2019

    So intricately decorated with your words – the picture​ is also so beautiful

    Liked by 1 person

  16. Infinite Living
    July 20, 2019

    Incredibly Beautiful!!

    Liked by 1 person

  17. Lisa Tomey
    July 21, 2019

    Vigorous and broken, such wonderful expressions!

    Liked by 1 person

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  19. Kunal Thakore
    July 23, 2019

    Both are brilliant, R!!!

    Liked by 1 person

  20. Saania2806
    July 28, 2019

    Beautiful!

    Liked by 1 person

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