The Journey!
Twin haikus in response to Susi’s weekly haiku challenge # 29, on the given pic prompt.
pic: Keith Alexander
Life, brakes your journey
setbacks inevitable
embrace resilience!
Thundering whistles
stands in mute abandonment
castaway on tracks!
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Nice
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Thanks Sunil!
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Great post 🙂
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Thank you!!
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No problem 🙂 check out my blog when you get the chance 😄
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Sure, will do shortly!
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Awesome 👍 👍👍 and for sure a journey of breaks and whistles. Lovely, Radhika 🌹🌹🌹🌹
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Gratitude Kamal 🙏
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Thanks dear Radhika and u r awesome with your challenges and haikus😊😊😊😊😊😊
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😇🙏💖
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😊😊😊😊🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹
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You’re on a roll, my friend!!!
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Thanks Kunal 😊
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Well penned post Radhika
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Thanks Tanvir!
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Well executed!
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Thank you Lisa!
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Well-done, Radhika! I enjoyed these very much! 🙂
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Your prompts are simply so good. Thanks Susi ☺️
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I’m really glad you are enjoying them!! The response and interpretations have been wonderful! 🙂
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Thanks Susi. It’s absolutely my pleasure. I’m still learning to interpret a picture ….😊
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Well, I look forward to every submission, Radhika! 🙂
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Amazing 👏… I really liked the second one
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Glad to hear that Sakshi. Many thanks ☺️
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My pleasure 😊
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Super Radhika 👍. You’ve reached new highs in your ‘high’kus 😊
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Haha! What an ingenious compliment Deepika. Thanks so much 💕
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Love it 🦋
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Thanks dear ☺️
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My Pleasure! Have a blissful week 💖
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Wishing you the same 💕
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I so love this – you are super talented
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Wonderful haikus! It is so nice to “embrace resilience” even in such a pathetic situation, I admire your take on the prompt.
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Guess it is a spirit we should all embrace in life. Thanks a bunch Megala!
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Super! Loved them!☺️☺️
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Thanks Richa 🙂
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On FLEEK as always 👍
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Thanks dear Jyo for that lovely comment. 😇💕
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I loved the second one so much something so profound about this.
Thundering whistles
stands in mute abandonment
castaway on tracks!
Awesome work Radhika.
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I take it as a huge compliment, coming from the queen of poetry, Megha 🙏
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Aww you humble me Radhika. You are such a telented poet yourself.
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The feeling is mutual ☺️
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❤
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❤️😇
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Awesome! Loved it!!
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Thanks Kranti!
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Always my pleasure 😊
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Superb Radhika!! Your words are so beautifully synchronized with the picture, awesome 👏👏👏
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I loved this- “Castaway on track”
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Thanks Moushumi.
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I enjoyed this immensely.
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Thank you Tom!
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