
Passionate verses resonated
under the glowing moonlight
inked in eternal fonts
profusing love.
Sadly,
the bubble of euphoria burst
as his broken promises
crumbled her world,
left her bereft of emotions.
His hollow words echoed
as empty feelings enveloped,
desolate evenings haunted her
the heart bled tears, consuming her
in an emotional pyre!
Poignant!
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Thanks Pooja!
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Wow a beautiful poem and so deep and profound words so well composed, Radhika 🙏🙏 🙏👍
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Thanks much Kamal 🙂
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Welcome Radhika 😊😊 😊
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Excellently expressed, keep up the good work radhika
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Thank you so much for the appreciation 😇
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It’s my utmost pleasure Radhika to be part of your blog readers
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Honoured my friend 🙏
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A very touching and emotional tale !!
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Thank you Deepika!
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Beautifully expressed the pain!
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Thanks Megala!
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Very sad.
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Yes, it is!
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It touched.. 💕
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🙏🙂
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Such touching words..so beautifully written.. Radhika 💕
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Thanks for your kind words Sarika ❤️
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Always my pleasure dear 🌺
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Tragic; there couldn’t be more fitting words to end it than “emotional pyre”…
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Thanks Narendra.
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So sad but excellently expressed !! 👌
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Thank you Jyo
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The great betrayal…. so emotionally put across.
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Thank you 🙏
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Beautiful words excellently delivered the emotion
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Many thanks Meenakshi!
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’emotional pyre’- what a befitting way to express what one goes through when heart breaks… beautiful!!
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Thank you so much Shaloo! You got that right!
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Oh so, so poignant. Very excellently expressed Radhika.
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Perfect!!
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Thanks Deeksha!
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such beautiful concise use of words.
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Thanks Megha!
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Beautifully expressed
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Many thanks Sakshi!
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Always a pleasure
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Reblogged this on KADALAB.
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