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Betrayal!

Reflection of Woman's Eye on Broken Mirror

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Passionate verses resonated

under the glowing moonlight

inked in eternal fonts

profusing  love.

Sadly,

the bubble of euphoria burst

as his broken promises

crumbled her world,

left her bereft of emotions.

His hollow words echoed

as empty feelings enveloped,

desolate evenings haunted her

the heart bled tears, consuming her

in an emotional pyre!

 

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38 comments on “Betrayal!

  1. Pooja
    September 15, 2019

    Poignant!

    Liked by 3 people

  2. boundlessblessingsblog
    September 15, 2019

    Wow a beautiful poem and so deep and profound words so well composed, Radhika 🙏🙏 🙏👍

    Liked by 1 person

  3. Rising Star
    September 15, 2019

    Excellently expressed, keep up the good work radhika

    Liked by 1 person

  4. DeepikasRamblings
    September 15, 2019

    A very touching and emotional tale !!

    Liked by 1 person

  5. Megala
    September 15, 2019

    Beautifully expressed the pain!

    Liked by 2 people

  6. Rupali
    September 15, 2019

    Very sad.

    Liked by 1 person

  7. The Typewriter
    September 15, 2019

    It touched.. 💕

    Liked by 1 person

  8. Sarika, Pure Reflections
    September 16, 2019

    Such touching words..so beautifully written.. Radhika 💕

    Liked by 1 person

  9. Narendra Nayak
    September 16, 2019

    Tragic; there couldn’t be more fitting words to end it than “emotional pyre”…

    Liked by 1 person

  10. Jyo
    September 16, 2019

    So sad but excellently expressed !! 👌

    Liked by 1 person

  11. Flashing Thought
    September 16, 2019

    The great betrayal…. so emotionally put across.

    Liked by 3 people

  12. Subbashini Meenakshi Sundaram
    September 17, 2019

    Beautiful words excellently delivered the emotion

    Liked by 1 person

  13. swalia
    September 17, 2019

    ’emotional pyre’- what a befitting way to express what one goes through when heart breaks… beautiful!!

    Liked by 1 person

  14. Moushmi Radhanpara
    September 17, 2019

    Oh so, so poignant. Very excellently expressed Radhika.

    Like

  15. Deeksha Pathak
    September 17, 2019

    Perfect!!

    Liked by 1 person

  16. Megha's World
    September 17, 2019

    such beautiful concise use of words.

    Liked by 1 person

  17. Sakshi
    September 22, 2019

    Beautifully expressed

    Liked by 1 person

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