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Everyday musings ….Life as I see it…….my space, my reflections and thoughts !!

If Only….

Ear, Mouth, Nose, Face, Head, Voices, Talk, Whisper

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Silent tears flowing

crashing waves against the shore

meandering butterflies

halcyon breeze of the eventide

twinkling stars outside the window

undulating emotions of the mind

reflections in the bare mirror

the quietude in solitude

reveries of the subconscious

behavior of our body

paths we tread on

vibrations of the cosmos

a mere touch, a look, a hum

all whisper secret messages to us,

if only we have the ear to hear them!

 

 

50 comments on “If Only….

  1. Indira
    February 8, 2020

    Must listen carefully to all whispers of life…!! Excellent, Radhika!

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  2. blindzanygirl
    February 8, 2020

    Kively. Describes so well

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  3. Riverside Peace
    February 8, 2020

    Beautiful!

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  4. Narendra Nayak
    February 8, 2020

    Such beautiful and evocative words, R! Awesomeness flowing in each phrase! So true – the world is full of signs and they shout out to us as they possibly can. Alas, if only we would heed…

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    • radhikasreflection
      February 9, 2020

      Thanks N. Yes, i wish we humans learn to pause a bit, listen to what our body and nature is telling us. Life can turn out to be very different then.

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  5. Sunith
    February 8, 2020

    Nicely write, Radhika! There are so many whispers around us waiting for us to hear them…

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  6. Jyotirmoy Sarkar
    February 8, 2020

    So true,we are unable to listen…
    Very nice coining of words and presentation also.

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  7. V.J. Knutson
    February 8, 2020

    Beautiful write; touching message.

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  8. The Typewriter
    February 8, 2020

    WOW.. 👍🏼😇❤💕…..👌🏼…

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  9. Olga
    February 8, 2020

    Your poetic finesse with words is inspirational. ❤ So many secret messages whisper to one’s psyche, but some are hard to decipher. A fleeting feeling of something beyond the physical world, “a vibration from the cosmos” or an aha moment that touches the heart.

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    • radhikasreflection
      February 9, 2020

      Thank you so much Olga. I guess we need to tune the frequency of our mind to connect to those vibrations from the cosmos. I know it’s easier said than done, but with awareness comes evolution. 🙏♥️

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  10. Team Wellness
    February 8, 2020

    In the midst of nature, with an awareness to listen and without the mobile to distract 😉
    Beautiful language and construct of the poem

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    • radhikasreflection
      February 9, 2020

      Thank you Karthik. Keeping away from the myriad distraction will be a challenge in this journey….huge but certainly doable.

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  11. DeepikasRamblings
    February 9, 2020

    Wow, beautiful lines. The last two lines enhance the beauty of the entire poetry👌👌

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  12. Jyo
    February 9, 2020

    So beautiful read Radhika 👍

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  13. Annika Perry
    February 9, 2020

    Radhika, a subliime poem and if only indeed! All around is the magic of the universe … the trick is to listen, understand, relate … yet how often does one allow oneself the time and energy to share in this beauty of existence.

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    • radhikasreflection
      February 9, 2020

      Isn’t it sad Annika, though we are aware of this to a great extent, yet we keep ourselves deaf to the signs and whispers that the universe tries to tell us?

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  14. You are truly taking me to some wonderful world ma’am, thank you

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  15. Pallavi
    February 9, 2020

    Thought provoking. Yes truly if we have the ear to listen to the whispers and vibrations of the cosmos. 👏🏻

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  16. Pallavi
    February 9, 2020

    And also what a great picture you chose. It almost has that dual message, a child, who’s probably much more aware and awakened to the vibrations is trying to whisper into an adult ear.

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    • radhikasreflection
      February 9, 2020

      I have always observed that children are always more aware, awakened and a bundle of curiosity. They somehow lose that in the process of growing up.

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  18. paeansunplugged
    February 10, 2020

    Listening is an art most of us have not mastered! Evocative lines, Radhika. ❤️

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  19. Krishna
    February 10, 2020

    Beautiful poem 😊 Picture is awesome too❤️

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  20. boundlessblessingsblog
    February 10, 2020

    Beautiful whispering words, Radhika and the picture was so profound. Awesome poem.

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  21. sunipukadiyil
    February 11, 2020

    Yes right Radhika all whispers are secret messages to us… !!! 😊

    Liked by 1 person

  22. Megha's World
    February 11, 2020

    Yes its true.. the more we hear the voices on the inside the more we get understanding of what happening on the outside.

    Liked by 1 person

  23. Ashish kumar
    February 16, 2020

    “Quietude in Solitude”…. Great creation indeed… Splendid work… Beautifully played with words and the picture is awesome… Liked it… 🙂

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