
Fractured dreams lie scattered
pathos looms large
over whelming emotions of life ebb
raucous din reverberates.
As I walk on the sandy shores at morn
timeless whispers of the undulating waves
play a song ,
the consonance of the tides
ring in a reflective melody.
I watch my footprints in the sands of time,
to realize, my illusionary myopic worries
seem to be a minuscule speck,
in the expansive vastness.
The damp redolence of saline breeze
cleanse my emotional core
washing away the chaotic cache,
filling me with propitious vigor!
V.J’s weekly challenge: MorningV.J’s weekly challenge: Morning
Sadje’s :What do you see challenge # 20
The damp redolence of saline breeze
cleanse my emotional core
Beautiful words 😍👍💞
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Many thanks Tushara. Glad that you liked them. ♥️
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So beautifully described 👌👌
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Thank you Deepika
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Very beautifully written.
So true that nature in all its magnificence can make our worries seen insignificant.
Thanks for joining in the prompt.
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Thanks so much Sadje. Nature in its many hues always has a magical and healing effect on me.
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You’re welcome! It’s true that nature has a healing and calming effect
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Amazing words
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Thanks Lorraine
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Beautiful
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Thank you Haroon
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So very true, beautiful. 🙂
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Thanks Aishwarya
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Welcome, Ma’am. 🙂
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Beautiful 👌👌👌
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Thank you Dheeraj 🙂
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😊😊😊
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Love the movement of this poem – from inner angst to an expansive understanding. Beautiful and inspiring.
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Thanks so much V. J.
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Most welcome!
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This is so beautifully crafted, Radhika. Love the reflective tone. ❤️
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Glad you liked the melody of my words. Many thanks Punam 🙂
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I sure did. You are so welcome. 😊
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Beautiful expression of feelings, Radhika!
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Thanks a lot Indira!
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Beautiful expression of emotions, Radhika! I especially love this stanza.
I watch my footprints in the sands of time,
to realize, my illusionary myopic worries
seem to be a minuscule speck,
in the expansive vastness.
Thank you so much for participating.
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Thanks so much Eugenia. I guess many of us tend to unduly worry about trivial issues. But when we look at the larger picture, our trouble appears to be just an iota .
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Yes, so true!
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Nicely done!
Pat
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Thanks Pat!
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Wow just loved it!!
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Thank you Bhavana
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Excellently expressed Radhika !!
Have a great and safe Sunday there😍
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Thanks Jyo. Hope you had a lovely Sunday ❣️
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The beauty in the words and the deep meaningful lines shows you live your life in a fantastic way ma’am 🌹🌹🌹
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Humbled Meenakshi. Thanks ♥️
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🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻
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This was a beautiful poem. You know how I love the sea. I can so connect with your words here. xo
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So glad to hear that…. thanks Drew!! xo
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xo
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Such beautiful words, R, you have raised the bar like never before! I was standing on the shore, the sand beneath my feet being washed away by the ebbing tide, your words reverberating through my mind…phenomenal!
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Thanks so much N. 🙏😇
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Beautiful words🌷
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Thank you Ash
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I love the poem and picture. The representation of the footprint and how it will wash away with the problems of today was superb.
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Thanks a lot Geri
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The third stanza really moved me. Nice work!
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Thanks so much Benjamin!
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Welcome!
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Your use of extraordinary and uncommon words has me feeling this lovely piece so deeply!
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