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Healing Sea!

ic: Akshay Premjith@ pixabay

Fractured dreams lie scattered

pathos looms large

over whelming emotions of life ebb

raucous din reverberates.

 

As I walk on the sandy shores at morn

timeless whispers of the undulating waves

play a song ,

the consonance of the tides

ring in a reflective melody.

 

I watch my footprints in the sands of time,

to realize, my illusionary myopic worries

seem to be a minuscule speck,

in the expansive vastness.

 

The damp redolence of saline breeze

cleanse my emotional core

washing away the chaotic cache,

filling me with propitious vigor!

 

V.J’s weekly challenge: MorningV.J’s weekly challenge: Morning

Eugi’s weekly prompt : Song

Sadje’s :What do you seeΒ challenge # 20

 

54 comments on “Healing Sea!

  1. Tushara Olivia
    March 13, 2020

    The damp redolence of saline breeze

    cleanse my emotional core

    Beautiful words πŸ˜πŸ‘πŸ’ž

    Liked by 1 person

  2. DeepikasRamblings
    March 13, 2020

    So beautifully described πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘Œ

    Liked by 1 person

  3. Sadje
    March 13, 2020

    Very beautifully written.
    So true that nature in all its magnificence can make our worries seen insignificant.
    Thanks for joining in the prompt.

    Liked by 1 person

    • radhikasreflection
      March 16, 2020

      Thanks so much Sadje. Nature in its many hues always has a magical and healing effect on me.

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      • Sadje
        March 16, 2020

        You’re welcome! It’s true that nature has a healing and calming effect

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  4. blindzanygirl
    March 13, 2020

    Amazing words

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  5. Haroon Mirza
    March 13, 2020

    Beautiful

    Liked by 1 person

  6. kittysverses
    March 13, 2020

    So very true, beautiful. πŸ™‚

    Liked by 1 person

  7. extinct0703
    March 13, 2020

    Beautiful πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘Œ

    Liked by 1 person

  8. V.J. Knutson
    March 13, 2020

    Love the movement of this poem – from inner angst to an expansive understanding. Beautiful and inspiring.

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  9. paeansunplugged
    March 13, 2020

    This is so beautifully crafted, Radhika. Love the reflective tone. ❀️

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  10. Indira
    March 13, 2020

    Beautiful expression of feelings, Radhika!

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  11. -Eugenia
    March 13, 2020

    Beautiful expression of emotions, Radhika! I especially love this stanza.

    I watch my footprints in the sands of time,

    to realize, my illusionary myopic worries

    seem to be a minuscule speck,

    in the expansive vastness.

    Thank you so much for participating.

    Liked by 1 person

    • radhikasreflection
      March 13, 2020

      Thanks so much Eugenia. I guess many of us tend to unduly worry about trivial issues. But when we look at the larger picture, our trouble appears to be just an iota .

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  12. jazzytower
    March 13, 2020

    Nicely done!

    Pat

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  13. Bhavana Madbhavi
    March 14, 2020

    Wow just loved it!!

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  15. Jyo
    March 15, 2020

    Excellently expressed Radhika !!
    Have a great and safe Sunday there😍

    Liked by 1 person

  16. The beauty in the words and the deep meaningful lines shows you live your life in a fantastic way ma’am 🌹🌹🌹

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  17. thelonelyauthorblog
    March 15, 2020

    This was a beautiful poem. You know how I love the sea. I can so connect with your words here. xo

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  22. Narendra Nayak
    March 16, 2020

    Such beautiful words, R, you have raised the bar like never before! I was standing on the shore, the sand beneath my feet being washed away by the ebbing tide, your words reverberating through my mind…phenomenal!

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  23. Ash
    April 7, 2020

    Beautiful words🌷

    Liked by 1 person

  24. Geri
    May 9, 2020

    I love the poem and picture. The representation of the footprint and how it will wash away with the problems of today was superb.

    Liked by 1 person

  25. bejamin4
    July 17, 2020

    The third stanza really moved me. Nice work!

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