The bait of the worldly attractions
lure the timid mind.
The din of the endless buzz
reverberates, before it
deafens our ears
to the call of our inner voice.
We ignore its gentle nudge
and tread far away from it.
Finally, its faint whispers
get buried under
our deceased conscience.
Beautiful !!!
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This runs deep, Radhika. So apt for the present day. I loved the way you portrayed it 👌
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Beautifully penned ❤️👌.
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Beautifully written, terse
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Very evocative poem. Beautifully written
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Beautiful image and poem. I do so hope that your three last lines
will apply for some but not all. Like many treasures it might be found
and polished up to full glory. 🌻.
Miriam
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Thank you Miriam. I am sure there are people who do not succumb to the lure of worldly temptations. They are able to hold their conscience upright and strong. But I am sad to see a large number of people walk away from that path.
Hope things are ok there and you are all safe.
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You are blessed with talent of saying strong messages in wonderful way, too good ma’am 💐🙏🏻
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Wonderful! The inner voice, the conscience, the soul speak…it is truly unfathomable,R, how we attracted to the lure of the ephemeral by neglecting our own scruples. The painting is beautiful and resonates perfectly with the words. Aditi is so talented!
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Many thanks N. Guess man fails to understand the ephemeral nature of this materialistic gain. Sadly It pains me a lot to see the increase in the dilution and ultimate murder of man’s inner voice.
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There’s another aspect which is worth pondering. Once you have found “enlightenment” and know where you stand and what the way ahead is, can you really follow it? What then happens to the aspirations of your loved ones? Can you then, for the sake of your kin, step back into the mirage knowing what it stands for? Or do you try to get them around to see what you perceive – which could not be an easy ask. No wonder the tales of the ascetics who renounced the world including relations. But then we are far from that age and times…
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Hmm….a deep thought or question knocking on a mature and thinking mind N?
Well, depends on what is enlightenment in today’s context. Is it renouncing everything in your spiritual quest or is it staying within the boundaries of familial duties and still practising and following the pursuit of inner awakening? Once a person has attained that enlightenment, he can practice detached attachment. He need not step back into the material mirage. Hope I made sense 🙂
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Thank you for entertaining this convoluted pitch. It’s a rather perplexing question that makes it’s presence felt everytime I think I am on the right path – OK, so you wish to know the eternal truth; free the soul of the cobwebs of the untruth. Fine. Once you are free of the shackles of the superficial, what then? Your answer is a reconfirmation of my musings – we are not in this world to renounce and retreat. We are here to speak through our deeds, and to achieve that if we have to be superficially attached, so be it! Yes, you make sense, R, because that is practicality. 🙂
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Wow. Poignant. Wonderful poem
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Thank you Lorraine!
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Great poem and picture Radhilka, congratulations to your daughter and you, have a nice day!!!
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Thanks Paulo. Stay safe!!
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Really nice poem Radhika!
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Many thanks 🙂
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A poetic look at certain facts of life…hope not everyone!!
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Yes Indira, hope not everyone falls prey to this cruel act.
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Deep and true words of Consciousness that we have buried like a sand dune. This world of illusion has swept us all in its orbit. Too good, Radhika.
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Thanks Kamal. And thank you so much for the review on my book on Amazon. Means a lot.
Hope you all are good. Stay safe. Have a nice day!
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Welcome Radhika and I am so happy to hear from you. Stay safe and have a great day 😊😊😊. Yes all is good in Mumbai
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Wonderfully said. Beautiful picture too!!
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Thank you Pallavi
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Sadly, so true! Beautifully expressed, Radhika.
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Thanks dear
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My pleasure, Radhika.
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We get so blinded by the glitter of the world that we fail to see that little spark screaming inside our soul. I hope we realize it soon. 🙂
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Wonderful poem Radhika and so the piece of art.
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Thanks so much Rupali
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You painted a vivid picture there.
It is very easy these days to suppress our conscience and succumb to the lures of consumerism, vanity and other excesses. SOmetimes, we just need a few quiet moments to have a conversation with our inner selves and focus on the right things.
I happened to come across your blog by mistake. So glad I did. I guess blog-hopping can work wonders sometimes.
Blogrolling you.
Cheers,
CRD
Do drop by mine.
https://scriptedinsanity.blogspot.com/
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Good poem with vivid imagery.
Bravo.
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Thanks Drew
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Very deep and philosophical and beautiful painting depicts your words so well!!
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Thanks so much Deeksha. Hope you are all doing fine.
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Till now all is good Radhika. Hope you too are safe and healthy.
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Yes thanks Deeksha. All good. Take care 💕
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Oh my Gosh you did it again! Such a beautiful picture! You are so talented!!!!
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Thanks Morgan. The painting was done by my daughter. I only gave my interpretation to it.
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Of course! Wow talent must run in the family! They are both incredible!
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Thank you for your kind words Morgan. Stay safe and take care 💕
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U too!
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Such profound words. Simply amazing 😍
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Thank you 🙏
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