On a cold wintry evening
romantic lovers entwine
patches of rapturous emotions.
The twilight breeze brings
with it, a scent of love.
The hearts braid together
an intimate conversation
beneath the layers of scarlet chiffon.
Dreams of passion weave
intricate designs of rhapsodic rhythm.
Threads seam in total surrender
to paint bold strokes of red.
Fervent kisses sew a sensuous hem,
motifs of tender caress lace it,
sealing it with an intense fusion.
Oh! the romantic soul is draped
with an amorous blanket!
Tweaked up an old poem of mine.
Beautiful
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Thanks Haroon
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You’re welcome
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What a beautiful collection of words! This sounds part is so perfect:
“The twilight breeze brings
with it, a scent of love.
The hearts braid together
an intimate conversation
beneath the layers of scarlet chiffon.”
The words fit together fantastically, and sounds awesome read aloud.
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Thanks so much Benjamin. So glad that you specially liked those verses.
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Welcome. Again: great work!
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Wow this was stunningly beautiful ❣️ amazing work Radhika!!
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Thanks a lot my friend 😊
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So very lovely.
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Radhika, your words flow wonderfully!!!
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Very romantic, Radhika!! 🙂
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words woven into a beautiful blanket of romance. 💕💞
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Many thanks Deepika 😇
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Beautifully worded, R! Or should I say beautifully woven…
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Thanks so much N
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words fail me, with my fingers on the key board. i am awed by the cosmic flow of words you have “braided ” into a poem.
Nothing less than a ton of gold for this masterpiece. No,… it is priceless,because it is divine.
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Wow! That beautiful comment literally weighs a ton 😇🤗. Reciprocating with a ton of gratitude 🙏❣️
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Words full of love for love 💕
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🙏😊♥️
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this is so alluring- well done
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Glad you think so. Thanks
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Absolutely. My pleasure
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Never saw this part of you Radhika, truly Romanticism!!
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😊🤗
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Love the crafting of words here. Awesome 🙂
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Thank you Kritika
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Such lovely lines. A great entry for the competition ♥️
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Thanks Shweta ♥️
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Magical writing Radhika. You have a great word power.
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Humbled Prashanti. Thanks so much !!
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Beautiful 👏🏻👏🏻
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Thank you 😊
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