
Serenades of the universe resonated in harmony
the flora and fauna played in perfect cadence
sublime melody of peace wafted across
composing an ambiance of tranquility.
Entered man, stealing the conductor’s baton
altering the configuration of the arrangement
the reverberations goes askew
the din deafens the quietude of nature.
O divine mother, I ask for forgiveness,
I bow down to thee with reverence
help man tune his offbeat keys
to restore the rhythm of the cosmic orchestra.
In response to Sadje’s What do you see #37
Beautiful 👌👌
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Many thanks Sangeetha 😊
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Amazing take!
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Thanks Rishika!
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Such a divine interpretation! Superb, Radhika. 👌🏼❤️
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Thank you Punam 💕
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You are welcome, dear.
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Lovely !🌷
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Thanks Dakshali!
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A punishment stealing the baton of nature’s orchestra…
Excellent interpretation of the image, Radhika!
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Thank you so much Indira. Glad you like this interpretation 😊
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Beautiful, wonderful choice of words and very nice interpretation.
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Happy to hear that. Thanks Sri!
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Its beautiful!!!
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Many thanks Era 🙂
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My pleasure 😊😊
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This is excellent! A wonderful message wrapped up in such well-chosen words.
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Thank you Chris!
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This is great Radhika. The end gives us hope that things might improve.
Thanks for joining in the challenge
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I hope so too. Thanks Sadje for this lovely prompt. My absolute pleasure!
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🙏🙏🙏
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Divine poem with such a beautiful message. Let us all learn to harmonize with each other and give away selfishness for a better world.
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Yes Kamal. Hope man learns to sing and live in harmony with nature. Many thanks!!
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Yes completely true, Radhika. You are welcome dear.
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Beautiful poem, Radhika! The message is so crucial to our survival! Thanks for this wonderful post!
Cheryl
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I am glad you liked it Cheryl. Many thanks
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We have definitely done a lot of harm. Such a beautiful take on the prompt ❤️
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Sadly yes. Thank you Shweta 🙂
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This poem is a prayer to the divine and effortlessly penned, Radhika 😉
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Many thanks Vishal
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Delightful poem, Ma’am. 🙂
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Thanks Aishwarya
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You are welcome, Ma’am. 🙂
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“To restore the rhythm of cosmic orchestra”– wonderfully said…I simply loved this line… ❤
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Thanks a lot Mani. Have a lovely weekend 😊
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So lovely Radhika!!!
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Thank you Paulo
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Stunning. A joy to read!
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Thank you 🙏
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Beautifully written Radhika. I do feel the same about this photo🌸💛
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Thanks so much Jude 💙
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My pleasure
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This is divine , Radhika.
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Thanks so much Cornelia!
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Love that thought. The composition of Mother Nature’s symphony…outstanding, R!
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Thanks so much N!!
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You really wove in the music imagery nicely throughout this piece. There’s definitely nothing off pitch about this one!
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Thanks Benjamin. It’s only man who is singing off pitch ( and creating a discord) in nature’s orchestra which is in perfect harmony.
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Yes, you’re right. We try to hard sometimes to fight against the natural order of the universe.
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Wonderful ma’am 🙏🏻 my respect.
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Thanks dear ❤️
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Loved this take R , beautiful lines ..
Tuning keys To restore the rhythm of cosmic orchestra….. just wow !
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Thank you so much HS🙂
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Ahhh Radhika such a lovely prayer. May we indeed change man’s offbeat keys and restore the balance of the universe
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Thanks Mich. 🙏
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‘Rhythm of cosmic orchestra’
Loved it completely!
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Glad to hear that. Many thanks Deeksha 😊
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A lovely spiritual take on the prompt, Radhika.
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Thank you Eugenia!
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You’re welcome, Radhika!
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Amazing!
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🙏😇
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Beautifully written!
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Thank you Prerna!
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Love the weaving of words with the depth in each word coming out beautifully. Human kind has for its selfishness disturbed the peace of the nature. A prayer apt for forgiveness.
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When every other being can co exist in perfect harmony, why does man always behave in a selfish manner?
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Money has taken over I believe which has increased the level of selfishness. Like The Little Prince has the businessman who counted and collected stars just to earn more. I guess.
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