
Colors of nations
wiped out by the pandemic
countries mask themselves
flights languishing on the grounds
world captive within borders.
A tanka follows the syllable count of 5/7/5/7/7
Colors of nations
wiped out by the pandemic
countries mask themselves
flights languishing on the grounds
world captive within borders.
A tanka follows the syllable count of 5/7/5/7/7
Really captures everything. Just so apt
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Thank you Lorraine!
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Wonderfully written
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Thanks Haroon
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You’re welcome
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That tanka is good in itself!! Great job!
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Thanks a lot Aashi!!
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Captive within borders indeed. 🙃
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🙏🙂
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Wow! “countries mask themselves”; “world captive within borders.” You are a master, I think, at creating powerful pieces with such few words! This is really, really, really wonderful as usual!
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Thanks a ton Benjamin for your lovely compliments. They sure are a huge encouragement to me. Gratitude 🙏
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You’re welcome. You’re deserving of them all!
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🙏🌷
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Wow R !! This is so good ! All captured in these few lines !
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Many thanks dear 💕
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Fabulous!!!
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Thank you Era 🙂
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☺☺
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You have explained the effects of pandemic in very few lines which throws out a lot of meaning, very well written again.
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Thank you so much Sri!
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I like how you summed up the present situation in 5 lines. Thank you for joining in!
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Glad you liked it Reena. Thanks and my pleasure!
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Reblogged this on Reena Saxena and commented:
Hostage …. by Radhika
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A beautiful tanka 💖
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Thank you Jude 😇
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Always a pleasure 🌷
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Your flair for words is excellent, Radhika!
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You are very kind Indira. Thanks for your constant support 🙏❣️
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True words of the pandemic, Radhika and a lovely tanka. Our world is where it is we humans have completely changed.
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Thanks Kamal.
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Welcome Radhika.
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Such an economy of words! Our plight is summed up in five lines! Beautifully expressed and well-chosen image. You never disappoint! Cheryl
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Thanks so much Cheryl for that generous comment. I am glad you liked it. ❣️
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“world captive within borders” – your words perfectly captures the present scenario💯
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Thanks a bunch Shruthi ❣️
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My pleasure, Radhika😇
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Good one!
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Many thanks Betul!
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Such a great take on the prompt ❤️
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Thank you Shweta 🙂
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Sad but true. Each line is so apt. A superb tanka, Ma’am.
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Thank you Aishwarya
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You are welcome, Ma’am. 🙂
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Summed up the current situation perfectly!
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Thank you Harsh
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Well described, Radhika
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Thank you VJ
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Beautifully said in few lines… its just wow..
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Many thanks Shilpa
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So effortlessly you have penned down on this topic many times and each time you select a complete different block of words in different styles… Awesome!!!
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Good observation Deeksha. Didn’t think about it 😀. Thanks a lot !!
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A lot said in few. Mask has actually united human kind. No colour or face to distinguish but alas wrongfully taken by man. Enjoyed the tanka.
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Thank you Kritika.
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Welcome 😊🌷
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Captivating post Radhika
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So true. Excellent take.
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