Born with a silver spoon,
callous, cavalier attitude
defined his personality,
life, was sinful vulgar indulgence.
Until
one incident radically transformed him.
Today,
he lives with his master in the distant hills
donating all his riches,
a new identity, pens the next chapter,
gives renewed meaning to life
the debris of the past buried,
his soul brims with contentment
experiences abundance of spiritual wealth.
Word count 64
Sammi’s weekend writing prompt : Cavalier (write prose or poetry in exactly 64 words)
I really like this message. It’s never too late to grow, to change. As long as you have time you can move onto a “new chapter”.
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Absolutely Benjamin. We are all students for life and I believe life is one of the best teachers 🙂
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Love this. Wonderful ending. Peace.
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Thank you Lorraine. May peace always prevail ❣️
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Yes. Agreed. ❤️
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Beautiful
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🙏🙏
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Fantastic! “his soul brims with contentment
experiences abundance of spiritual wealth.” This line is amazing as is the poem itself!
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So glad to hear that Rishika. Many thanks dear ❤️
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It’s my pleasure🤗💕
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Contentment is the key. Nice one, Ma’am. 🙂
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Yes Aishwarya. If man is not content, he can never be happy. Thank you dear🙂
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You are welcome, Ma’am. 🙂
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Soul brimming with contentment! ❤️ such a wonderful feeling that must be 😊loved your collaboration of all these prompts, and the way you have beautifully penned this !
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Thanks so much HS. Feeling of spiritual growth is very close to my heart, guess that’s why this came effortlessly. 🙏
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Good to know R ❤️😊 for me too to a great extent ..
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There’s lots of poetic devices present in your poem… Fantastic.. Learn to more from you !
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Thanks Dakshali 🙂
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As usual beautiful ❣
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Gratitude Era 🙂
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😊😊
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Oh this is a gorgeous take, I really enjoyed this
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Elated Jude. Thanks a bunch!
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My pleasure 🌼
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I’m glad that he found himself all over again. A beautiful take on the prompt, my dear ❤️
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Thanks so much Shweta ♥️
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Soulful words of wisdom, Radhika and yes that is the Reality once you understand that life is nothing but an unraveling.
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Absolutely Kamal. Thanks so much for the lovely comment!
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You are welcome Radhika.
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That’s beautiful, well done 👍
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Thank you Rubina
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My pleasure 😊
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Wonderful message Radhika!!!
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🙏 Paulo
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Super sentiment!
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Thank you Chris!
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Reminds me of the journey of Buddha towards enlightenment. Having experienced both extremes gave him the necessary perception and depth.
Thank you for this beautiful reminder! Have a great day! 🙌
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Thank you U. Yes, actually the story of Buddha was a kind of inspiration for this poem. 😊
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This is a wonderful tale of redemption.
Thanks a lot for joining in the challenge
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Thanks Sadje. Redemption is what we all finally seek.
Enjoyed writing this one!
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That’s great. 👍
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Interesting that contentment comes only through loss and struggle. You are on to something Radhika.
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Thanks VJ for your kind words.
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Welcome
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Wonderful story woven with all the prompts, Radhika! 👌🏼
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Thanks a lot Punam!
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Always a pleasure, dear!
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What a glorious piece, Radhika, I love how you wove your words into a beautiful message. Thank you for joining in.
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Thank you so much Eugenia. ❣️
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You’re welcome, Radhika! 😉
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Great message and a beautiful poem!!
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Thank you Aashi!
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All in one composition..well done, Radhika!
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Many thanks Indira!
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A very meaningful composition, R. I believe that contentment comes through enlightenment, when we understand our purpose on earth, and then the path to tread suddenly emerges in front of us.
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Absolutely N. Sometimes one incident is all it takes for this and sometimes it is the gradual understanding and maturity that helps us comprehend the essence of our purpose in life.
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The monk who sold his ferrari.
A beautiful message in few lines.
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Haha! Yes… thanks Kritika ❣️
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Pleasure is mine 🙂
(Heart)
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Wonderful lines, R. Deep meaning too! Thank you for sharing!
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Glad you liked it N. Thanks 😊
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Your wise words tells a lot, it gives hope for life as anyone can loose their sin at anytime and get a new future
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If the repentance is from the heart and the change genuine, I am sure the sins will be forgotten. Thanks Meenakshi. Stay safe.
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So beautifully penned and presented, Radhika.. Really loved this piece 💞💞👌
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Thanks Deepika 🙂
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Loved these message. Lovely ending
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Brilliant!!
All themes and one post!!
How many medals had you won in your school and college activities Radhika…
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Aww… thanks Deeksha. You made my day 😇💕
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😊❤️
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ahhh lovely Radhika.. i love how you emphasized the idea that wealth is not for us to keep forever
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At last he was lucky to find the meaning of his existence!!
More important than another thing.
Beautifully penned, Radhika.💜😍
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Thanks a lot Chetna. Yes, very few people find the true meaning of life.
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Wonderful post with a strong message.
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Well written😊
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Thanks Arun!
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